Story Funknath's Cricket Journey:-Bengal vs Kerela at M. A. Chidambaram Stadium,Chennai Day 1

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Good start to the story funky.But you could have avoided some spelling and typographical errors though.
For example,
In the match against AOGC ,you said the opponents needed 48 runs from 6 overs at 6.00 instead of 8.00.
Anyways dude the idea of a newspaper cover story is very good.All the best.
 
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Good start dude, but as Nash said you should first avoid spelling mistake such as Bengl for Bengal.
 
Well at least you can have your first appearance for them in a practice match(if picked) and then in the Ranji Trophy. Good writing and a somewhat unknown team to me but I'm sure you'll do fine. As everyone has said so far, make sure you spell check your updates.

Keep it up, looking forward to your first match.
 
Every body thanks for the comment.

@Amiya Shreyas:- I used 'Agency FB' font
 
Great updated Funky, just like





















reading a real paper KUTGW.
 
Are you making this up, or playing it on some game? Just curious.

Newspapers look brill BTW. Haven't been in the Story section for ages, so don't know if you invented it or if someone else pioneered it, but it looks very nice.
 
I voted nice in the poll by the way as I feel sometimes you have one update, then one straight after when you could of put them in the same post. Apart from that it is pretty darn awesome.

Ray bowled awesome and the other bowlers accompanied him well. Unfortunately you aren't playing but if you were I could imagine you picking up a wicket or two and scoring some runs. Hopefully Bengal can win.
 
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