Story || MTN Cricket Corporate Cup || England Lose Against African's Comprehensively ||

[CG123]

Not sure what is up with your scorecard... you should try to line it up.
You should also try to write stuff about the game, not just the pre-match stuff.
Good win for Pakistan none the less.

 

[surendar]

1) Good efforts in first place.
2) Change the font & it's look. Try comic sans with size 3 & use different colors.
3) Apart from pre/post match stuffs, describe some game stuffs too - Atleast an innings update.
4) Scorecard - Not necessary you need to do gfx but something like,

Team X ( XYZ Overs, RPO : .... )
Xmen - x runs
Ymen - y runs
Amen - Awickets/xy runs

Team A( XYZ Overs, RPO : .... )
Amen - a runs
Bmen - b runs
Xmen - Xwickets/ab runs

even the mini scorecard will also adds detail to the story.

 

[rahuldravidfan]

C'mon Pakistan. Pull up your socks in real life too. You've been down for quite a while. Great update

 

[Aussie Team]

Is It Real Match???

 

[surendar]

Is It Real Match???

It's a story

 

[ShamiLoverGlipGlops]

Cheer's To all.. Your suggesstion will be followed... and will improve in my next update

 

[harrisb]

great going with the story so far rahul, keep going, this story has the potential to be amazing.

 

[Gaurav_7]

Not sure what is up with your scorecard... you should try to line it up.

That is because he quoted it.You should code it Rahul.

 

[ShamiLoverGlipGlops]

Yes User2010.. I have made some other plans for next match

 

[ShamiLoverGlipGlops]

Match 2

Group B

Zimbabwe VS Australia @ Karachi

Sameer : Welcome To Fun Time.. It's First Group B match.. and it's the zimbabwe team taking on the aussie's.. Zimbabwe witnessess return of some good old player's and aussie's with the likes of S.Waugh.. M.Waugh.. and other's... Zimbabwe have the looks of player's like Flower Brother's.. Olongo.. Nkala.. etc...

Sameer : We will straight move to the stadium where we have the pitch report by Sunny Gavakar...

Pitch Report

Yes.. Welcome to Second match between Zimbabwe and Australia.. It's been while that international matchess have not been played here in karachi... But pitch looks well prepared... Usually this is not a 300+ runs wicket and 270-280 will be a good fisrt innings total.. So in my View WIN THE TOSS AND ELECT TO BAT FIRST​

Sameer : So win the toss and elect to bat.. is what Sunny says.. Let's Move Across to check who actually wins the toss and does what..

G.Flower calls head and it's a Head... Zimbabwe Win The Toss and Elect To Bat First

Sameer : So.. Zimbabwe batting first.. Let's See how much the Zimbabwe team score..

273/6 in 50 Over's.. Good Score by the Zimbabwe team and they have done thier best... PA Strang played a beauty of a knock.. and helped them score this kind of target... Will the aussie's be able to chase this target?? Let's See...

:hpraise:hpraise That's a great match.. Australia scored down zimbabwe's 274 runs target... First with the help of M.Waugh who scored 83.. then Ricky Ponting Who scored 138 Runs.. What was brilliant to watch was the cover drives that Ponting played.. M.Waugh never seemed to be out of cricket for this many years.. Ricky continued to show his master class..

That's it from match 2.. Will Be Back Soon

To Be Continued​

 

[Mihir Doshi]

This is much better... KIU...

 

[Sartaj]

Streak was expected to do better

 

[Mihir Doshi]

Yes.. Looking Forward To Other Games

 

[ShamiLoverGlipGlops]

Yes planning to go a bot slow for few days..

 

[ShamiLoverGlipGlops]

Next Few Matches Will Be Up By Today Or Tomorrow..