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Nice work guys but I'm not sure on your start here fear. I think you should have finished because your start is too close to a finished product if you get what I mean. It looks great, the lighting and texture work all look excellent but maybe you should 1. Finish this sig off yourself because it is almost done imo and with just a few edits it could be finished. I do like what vickyrox has done but he obviously wanted to do a bit more then a few edits so he changed the scheme of the sig. So I would like to see what you can do with that sig fear.

Nice finish by vicky nice colour scheme work but the textures look a little LQ and the text needs to be worked on.


kiu guys. :)


If anyone wants to do a collab just make the start of a sig and post it here and i'll finish it up OR visitor message me or tell me in my thread that you want me to start and I will do so. Fear I would like to do a collab with you if you want to finish and I'll start.

kiu guys. :)
 
Dr.Pepper's Start:
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Sorry Mani, I only kept the arrow, the text and the clouds in the end. The text is sensational by the way and I really liked the idea of the arrow. Sorry if I ruined your idea for this wallpaper by completely changing the colour scheme.

Shravi's Finish:


On a side note, this is my first 1024x768 wallpaper :D.
 
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Wow awesome collab. Nice start Pepper, you have Shrav a lot to work with and a really good finish great use of textures and lighting but maybe give it a tiny bit of contrast and make the render stand out a little more.

kiu! great work both of you!
 
Wow thats a great finish Shravi..It looks brilliant superb done mate. Really lived everything on it the bg looks beautiful and render effects are also good. Good use of the arrow. KUTGW. Good start Mani...
 
If anyone wants to do a collab just make the start of a sig and post it here and i'll finish it up OR visitor message me or tell me in my thread that you want me to start and I will do so. Fear I would like to do a collab with you if you want to finish and I'll start.

kiu guys. :)


Hey Matt lets do a wallpaper collab of your favourite "pup"
Micheal Clarke
 
I got one booked in with Ayub, a sig of Berbatov so when he sends me that I gotta finish it but I'll do a wally with you :) Do you wanna start or me?
 
How the f- did you manage that!? From my crappy wallpaper! Do you mind sending the new .psd back so I can see what you did?
 
Thats a really awesome collab. I like the start by Mani. The clouds in the bg look quite good. The render in the bg actually makes his start look bad. The text is a tad too bright. The idea of the arrow is really good.

Overall: 8.5/10 for the start

Now on to the finish. Thats a brilliant finish! The text looks great. The positioning of the arrow in line with the text looks great. I like the text in the bg too. I love how shrav changed the render that Mani place in the bg. Nice render effects and the render blends in really well. The added C4Ds look brilliant!

Overall: 10/10 for the finish.

Overall: 9.5/10 for the wallpaper!!
 
Awesome work Mani
The finished sig is awesome.
The start was not so good by ayub but you simply converted into a great sig man

vickyrox added 0 Minutes and 34 Seconds later...

AND btw anyone up for a collab...
if yes pm me with your start....
 
Ayub's start:
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My finish:
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My new style of commenting:
Intro: Oh my goodness!!!
Basic Comments: Thats an awesome collab!!!
Constructive: Fine start by ayub, and amazing finish by mani!!
Conclusion: Mani u r becoming a pro now!!!
Rating: 3/5 for the start, and 5/5 for the finish!!
 
Constructive: Fine start by ayub, and amazing finish by mani!!

That's not very constructive, man.

Nice background given to you by Ayub but the render looked a little too sharpened. You turned it around by making it much cleaner but perhaps could have sharpened it just once after all of the blurring. I liked the horizontal lines in the background that Ayub gave you (I think it might have been a wood texture) and perhaps you could have kept that more visible without keeping the green circles as you have changed the colour scheme (very well done on that btw). Nice use of light textures. Looks fantastic and the yellow-red works very well. However, it's probably a little too bright on his left shoulder. If you were to work on that, it would be perfect. The text, you could have spent more time on this or left it out because this signature would actually look good without text. Keep it up! You're fast improving, Ayub and Mani!
 
Yeah that was a really awesome background from Ayub but it was merged layers so it was difficult to keep parts of it, I tried but at the end the adjustment layers got rid of it. The text really was slapped on and I'm disappointed with that. Thanks for the comments guys :).
 

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