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[nightprowler10]

Finally downloaded the file. Excellent graphics Usy, but unfortunately that was the best part of magazine. Poor grammar really killed it for me. Some nice features like the player of the month, cricket tips, etc., so it certainly has potential. I'd prefer if people used their real names in the articles but I can see why you wouldn't want to.

 

[Highlander999]

Finally downloaded the file. Excellent graphics Usy, but unfortunately that was the best part of magazine. Poor grammar really killed it for me. Some nice features like the player of the month, cricket tips, etc., so it certainly has potential. I'd prefer if people used their real names in the articles but I can see why you wouldn't want to.

Cheers mate. I did spend some time doing it and hoped you guys enjoyed it.

I'm going to echo what eceryone else said and say it was poorly laid out and quite a few gramatical errors in it. However I think this month's should be ton's better as we can now build on a solid foundation.

 

[sohum]

I'm going to echo what eceryone else said and say it was poorly laid out and quite a few gramatical errors in it. However I think this month's should be ton's better as we can now build on a solid foundation.

I don't think it was poorly laid out at all. I think it was laid out really well. However I stopped reading most articles after a couple of paras because there were spelling mistakes that could be caught even by Firefox 2's spellchecker.

 

[treva]

I agree with the comments others have made. The grammar was poor, and that really turned me off reading the large articles. I liked the layout and the look of it all was fantastic. If the grammar is improved it would be a top quality magazine. For now it's good with room for improvement.

Great work all the guys involved

 

[usy]

thanks, Well atleast my Article team gave out some important time to write out some stuff, maybe we can improve on grammar later.

 

[Dr. Pepper]

Excellent first attempt. Graphics and layout was brilliant. Unfortunately grammar wasn't too good but that can be improved with more issues. I think the layout is set for all the magazines, considering there will be more. Usually magazines will have to play around with that for the first few releases but you've done it really well the first time round. I enjoyed reading the articles and the Story Of The Month article was my favourite. I didn't really get the comic strip. Good but could improve

 

[manee]

Usy, I'm really surprised at the quality of the graphics. It is absolutely brilliant and I think you could probably land a real-world job if you were looking for one.

Absolutely. Fantastic graphics. On par with professional stuff.

 

[SciD]

Excellent first attempt. Graphics and layout was brilliant. Unfortunately grammar wasn't too good but that can be improved with more issues. I think the layout is set for all the magazines, considering there will be more. Usually magazines will have to play around with that for the first few releases but you've done it really well the first time round. I enjoyed reading the articles and the Story Of The Month article was my favourite. I didn't really get the comic strip. Good but could improve

Thanks Man. Unlike others I had just 1 day to write about the story which spanned so many months.

 

[usy]

I actully also had to rush on last few pages, and was not at my best..

 

[iloveireland]

I agree with the comments others have made. The grammar was poor, and that really turned me off reading the large articles. I liked the layout and the look of it all was fantastic. If the grammar is improved it would be a top quality magazine. For now it's good with room for improvement.

Great work all the guys involved

Yeah I tried to keep mine short and sweet

 

[Hitterman]

Anyone read the jokes?

 

[Dr. Pepper]

Anyone read the jokes?

i did. i didn't understand the comic strip. could you please explain?

 

[usy]

oh i made that, i can't be bothered explaining it but it's funny.

 

[lancashire666]

i cant really ad anything extra to what has been said but for a first attempt it was very good, obviosly lots of places where you guys can improve, which has been pointed out already, but its a very good start

 

[Hitterman]

The team will try to do better next time