rabeta.art (Pietersen Wall)

[Cricketman]

I'm sorry but that Brett Lee sig is nowhere near your best IMO.
Its decent in some aspects but i don't like the 'diamond/wind (whatever you wanna call it)' brushing, and it seems overbrushed on the whole.
although the text is nice and the render effects are good.

 

[hassan]

i agree with Cricman about that being your best eva...
Its good but i think the brushes and whiteness is too over used... render looks nice though but although nice idea about the text,(thx to me lol) but wrong choice of colour and maybe font too...

 

[rabeta]

Thanks for the comments, but I hardly brushed at all. Only used a couple of brushes and they were the flow lines and the gold grunge at the bottom...

 

[Cricketman]

Thanks for the comments, but I hardly brushed at all. Only used a couple of brushes and they were the flow lines and the gold grunge at the bottom...

Hmm.
Yeah, I don't really like the gold grunge thing at the bottom, i think thats what's making it look so "over brushed" (even though it really isn't) and white.

 

[hassan]

I just meant to white at the bottom rabeta, but its still a top sig. Dam you mite beat me in the battle

 

[rabeta]

Yea, I agree it is a bit too white, though I struggled to get Brett Lee to blend in with the surrounding colours and this was the best I could do with it. With him being in whites, it is hard to get the sig's colours looking good. But I won't make excuses , will try to work on that next time.

 

[hassan]

yes i know what you mean rabz. maybe just colour their kit with same colour as bg i dnt mean literally colour it by give a tinge shade

 

[rabeta]

yes i know what you mean rabz. maybe just colour their kit with same colour as bg i dnt mean literally colour it by give a tinge shade

Yea maybe a photofilter would have done the trick on the white...

 

[hassan]

Perfecto...

 

[treva]

I like both of them but I like the Brett Lee the most. The Tevez sig blends well but I prefer the Lee render and the lighting is good, even if it is a tad too light at the bottom

Good work Rabz...

 

[Bilal91]

lee sig is just too bright...text looks good though...

 

[rabeta]

Love this one, something different again. Spent a lot of time on it, especially the stamp, and getting the texturing right on the envelope. Yes it is an envelope (Hope you realized lol). Contains quite a lot of information about the player, average (Test) on the stamp, his DOB, and a few ther things. I would like to know how to improve it, and maybe if people like it, do a tut on it.

Here it is:

 

[Bilal91]

wow...really good work mate...love the detail...superb...check if the text looks better on overlay...as it looks like it's just slapped on the BG...

 

[rabeta]

Thanks a lot for the comment Bilal, here is the text on overlay, and yea, I think it looks better. Cheers .

 

[hassan]

yeah overlay text looks better the whole sig is fantastic... the stamp maybe needs workin doesnt look so real atm and text would look better if it was tiny bit smaller