[Vengeance Posted!] Out of a rut - A Chez-style WWE and EWR story

[The Spin]

Raw Preview

Last night was the huge One Night Stand Pay-Per-View and all the fallout will be live on Monday Night Raw!

John Cena managed to overcome the giant Great Khali again last night in a Falls Count Anywhere match. What will happen with the Champ now?

The World Tag Team Champions, The Hardy Boyz, managed to retain their titles over the impressive World's Greatest Tag Team. But now, just 24 hours later, they must put their belts on the line once more, this time against Cade and Murdoch.

With the draft only one week away the superstars are preparing for what could be a career changing night. On the Draft special edition of Raw there will be a series of interpromotional matches, with each winner earning their brand a random draft pick. The top Raw superstars, specially seletcted to represent the brand, will be warming up for the big event next week.

Plus, Santino Marella puts his Intercontinental title on the line in a match against a mystery opponent!

Confirmed matches:

World Tag Team Champions The Hardy Boyz vs. Cade and Murdoch
Eugene vs. Randy Orton - Draft Warm-Up
Ric Flair vs. Umaga - Draft Warm-Up
Intercontinental Champion Santino Marella vs. ???

7:00pm. 2 hours before Raw goes live.

Vince: Looks like a solid show, built on the grounds we came up with, but with some changes. I like it.

Chez: Well thank you Mr.McMahon

Vince: But there is one thing. This guy here, he isn't under a WWE contract at the moment. Have you managed to get him to come over here, because I tried and he wouldn't

Chez: Currently his outside ventures are running thin, so he said he would like to return full time. He was in the area so I suggested he arrived tonight, and he was more than happy to.

Vince: That is genius right there. OK, get this out to everyone. We will run this script.

Who is the mystery hiring? Guesses are welcome

 

[Jaztheman]

Simoa Joe? Are they from TNA? So many questions can be asked

Good pres Chez looking great.

 

[The Spin]

From now on, whenever I reveal one of the rules that I have to follow in a backstage segment, I will clarify it.

Rule 1 (from the Chez hiring segment): You are not allowed to sign any well known Indy stars (Styles, Daniels, Samoa Joe etc.)

 

[Rated:RKO]

From now on, whenever I reveal one of the rules that I have to follow in a backstage segment, I will clarify it.

Rule 1 (from the Chez hiring segment): You are not allowed to sign any well known Indy stars (Styles, Daniels, Samoa Joe etc.)

Seems that you have a test then.

 

[pinchinator]

Im going to say Goldberg

 

[The Spin]

Sorry for the lack of update, exams have pushed me a little. It will be up ASAP.

On the note of Chris Benoit passing away, he will remain in the story as a tribute. I believe it neither disrespectful nor tasteless to do so

 

[Jaztheman]

Good to hear Chez, good luck with the story.

 

[The Spin]

A further note on Benoit, I am keeping him to remember Benoit the wrestler, not the man who murdered his family. I would like to put the latter out of my mind and remember the great technichian that Benoit was

 

[The Spin]

Monday Night Raw
Monday 4th June

Still Here

The Raw stage lights up with pyro and the theme song blasts through the arena as tonights show in Orlando, FL gets underway. The Champ's music plays, bringing the crowd to its feet. John Cena hits the ring with his Spinning WWE Championship belt, Chaingang medallion, football shirt and jeans on. He picks up a mic to address the crowd.

John Cena: The Champ is STILL here! And no matter what that 7-foot giant wierdo threw at me, I am still the champ! So if any of you back there want to come and take this off me, if you want some, come get some!

Khali's music plays and the giant steps out and walks down to the ring. Cena tries to act unfazed, but is visibly scared.

Khali: Belt, mine!

Khali tries to attack Cena, but he quickly dives out of the ring. Before Khali can continue his persuit the Executive Assistant, Johnathan Coachman, makes his way onto the ramp.

Coach: Look, it is obvious that you both still have issues with one another so tonight I will make a match with both of you involved. It will be WWE Champion John Cena... vs. The Great Khali... vs. Chris Masters... vs. Johnny Nitro. It will be a Fatal 4-Way match and the title will be on the line!

Coach walks off looking pleased with himself and Khali stares down a frustrated Cena.

Chez's Notes: Cena loses some overness for looking a bit weak, but with a guy as huge as Khali, who wouldn't?

::Fade to Commercial::

Eugene vs Randy Orton - Draft Warm-Up

"The Legend Killer"'s music plays as he walks down to the ring for this match. He poses on a turnbuckle to a chorus of boos. Out comes Eugene who gets a pop from the crowd. He gives the audience high-fives and waves at them from inside the ring. The bell rings and the two men lock up in the ring. Orton shoves Eugene over into the corner and delivers a Big Boot to the face. He takes the upper hand, delivering a DDT and Snap Suplex to Eugene. Eugene fights back though, turning a powerbomb attempt into an Aeroplane Spiral, following with a headbutt. Orton quickly regains control with a reversal of the Rock Bottom into a Clothesline. He whips Eugene to the ropes, but knocks the ref down and out of the ring in the process. Orton suplexes Eugene, but out comes Eugene's "friend" Hacksaw Jim Duggan with his famous Two By Four and clocks Orton with it. The ref revives and Eugene covers for the easy pin. Duggan comes in to celebrate with Eugene, but Eugene isn't happy for some reason. Eugene isn't even displaying his usual charictaristics, such as thumb sucking. Duggan attampts to raise Eugene's arm, but he pulls it back and kicks Duggan in the gut! Rock Bottom! Eugene has turned on his 'friend' and walks off. The crowd are in silent confusion.
Winner: Eugene

Keep On Fighting

We cut to an interview with The Hardy Boyz and Todd Grisham

Todd: Last night you two managed to defend your World Tag Team Titles against World's Greatest Tag Team. How was that match?

Jeff: It was intense and hard, but we battled through to win and keep these pieces of gold.

Matt: We just worked together and although there were some moments where we seemed to be on the back foot we just had to battle back

Todd: Now after that just 24 hours ago, you have to defend your titles again against Cade and Murdoch. Your thoughts?

Matt: When you are champions you have to defend your title whenever and wherever is necessary. We are fighting champs and we won't back down form a challenge, man.

Jeff: We will just keep on fighting and make sure that these stay with us. They had better be ready for a big match and raise their game if they want to win against us.

Todd: Thanks a lot for your time

Chez's Notes: Both Hardyz gained overness for just being great fighters

::Fade to Commercial::

Whoever

Backstage the Intercontinental Champion Santino Marella is with Maria

Maria: Hey everyone. I am here with the Intercontinental Champion Santino Marella. Tonight you have to defend your title against a mystery opponent, it could be anyone, its so exciting! How do you feel about this?

Santino: Maria, I a-promise you, I will go out a-there with my Intercontinental CHampionship and I will-a come-a back with it. I will-a beat anyone that tries to get in-a my way.

Maria: But it could be anyone. Arn't you just a teeny bit s

Ric Flair vs Umaga - Draft Warm-Up

Back in the ring, Umaga is stomping down the ramp alongside manager Estrada. The Samoan Bulldozer is ready to take on Ric Flair. The Nature Boy is now coming down the ramp to a chorus of "WOOOOOO"s. The match is underway and Umaga immediately goes on the attack, overpowering Flair and pushing him to the mat. He then delivers some huge clubbing blows to 'Naitch', the whole time Estrada is at ringside supporting his man. Flair fights back with an eye rake, a trademark of the Dirtiest Player in the Game. Flair goes for the Figure 4 Leg Lock, but Umaga powers out. Flair is whipped into the corner and Umaga runs and uses the Stinger Splash! Samoan Spike attampt... is successful! Umaga covers 1...2...3. This one is over, Umaga looking strong against Flair. But he isn't finished, Umaga continues the attack on Flair, eventually leaving him and walking back down the ramp.
Chez's Notes: Umaga gains overness for taking out Flair, Flair in turn loses overness for jobbing to the big man.


Once, Twice, 3 Times...

We now go backstage where we can see Melina in the Women's locker room with her WWE Womens Championship belt. The door crashes open as Candice Michelle walks in.

Candice: Hey ****, sorry to barge in on you, but I was just wondering, I have beaten you 3 times in a row as of last night and you stil have that belt with you. I want it now because I have earned it.

Melina: Who said you can barge in here on me? I am the Women's Champion whether you like it or not and that is how it will stay because I am the best woman in the WWE

Candice: I have 3 wins against you, I could beat you any time I wanted to.

Melina lines up the slap and connects, its on now! The 2 Divas go for one another and end up in a huge catfight on the floor as we fade out

:: Fade to Commercial::

Santino Marella vs Shelton Benjamin - WWE Intercontinental Championship

Dropkick connects...Marella goes down like a skanky hooker. Marella counters an avalanche with a raised foot to the face. Danielson takes a back suplex. The referee bumps after catching a wild right hand and is down. Devastating powerbomb thing ONTO THE NECK very nearly kills Danielson. I bow to the coolness of that move. Hooks the leg, but the referee is still out. Danielson gets out the back of a Marella bodyslam attempt. Flying elbow from Benjamin. Spinning bulldog in the corner, Marella is down. 1 - 2 - no 3 though. Marella walks into a face crusher variation. 1 - 2 - 2.999 Marella reverses a hip toss. Marella almost suplexes Benjamin through the mat. 1 - 2 - almost a 3. Marella walks into a trip. Benjamin floors Marella. Here it comes...Rollover Double Underhook! Marella taps! Benjamin celebrates his title win!
Chez's Notes: Benjamin gains overness for winning the title, Marella doesn't lose. He is an underdog after all.

The Hardy Boyz vs Cade and Murdoch - World Tag Team Championships

Flying elbow from Matt Hardy. Matt Hardy with a running dropkick into the corner. M.Hardy tags out to Jeff Hardy. Trevor takes a flying neckbreaker from Jeff Hardy. Pin : 1....2..no. The match continues. Jeff Hardy with an enziguri. Tag to Matt Hardy. The Hardy's whip Trevor into the ropes and hit a double clothesline. Pin : 1....2....no! They cut that one close. Trevor slips out the back of a Matt Hardy bodyslam. Tag to Lance Cade. Fallaway slam by Lance Cade. Big clothesline from Cade. Cade tags out to Trevor Murdoch. Cade and Murdoch whip M.Hardy into the ropes and hit a double back elbow. Rude Awakening on Matt Hardy by Trevor. Trevor Murdoch hits a bulldog off the ropes. Tag to Lance Cade. Flying shoulder tackle by Cade sends M.Hardy to the mat. M.Hardy counters an arm wringer with an elbow to the side of the head. Tag between Matt Hardy and Jeff Hardy. Cade takes a hurrancarana. Jeff Hardy has Lance Cade down on the canvas and is ascending the corner. Through the air, Swanton Bomb! 1....2....3. The Hardy's climb opposite turnbuckles, working the crowd as they celebrate their victory.
Chez's Notes: Hardyz gain overness for being awesome as always in tag action

::Fade To Commercial::

We now go to a video package highlighting the history between John Cena and The Great Khali, including some parts of last night's PPV match. That leads us into our main event.

John Cena vs The Great Khali vs Chris Masters vs Johnny Nitro - Fatal 4-Way

Big backdrop on Nitro, executed well. Stiff chop lights up Nitro. Pin : 1....2..no. The match continues. Chris Masters hits a bulldog off the ropes. Johnny Nitro powers out of a Chris Masters headlock. Hard back suplex on Masterpiece. Pin : 1....2..no. The match continues. Spinning bulldog in the corner, Masterpiec is down. Hooks the leg : 1....2....shoulder up. Masterpiec counters a sleeper hold by turning it into a jaw breaker. Masterpiec slams The Great Khali. Masterpiece tags out to The Great Khali. Punch by Khali on Nitro. Hard slam by Khali. Punch by Khali on Nitro. The Great Khali with a standing spinebuster. Pin : 1....2....no! They cut that one close. Khali tags out to John Cena. Big clothesline on Nitro. Side suplex from Cena. Pin : 1....2..no. The match continues. Big backdrop on Nitro, executed well. Cover! 1....2...kick out. Hard slam by Cena. Cover! 1....2....kick out at the last second! Cena looks shocked. Tag to Chris Masters. Powerslam from Chris Masters. Fallaway slam by Chris Masters. Masterpiec bodyslams John Cena. John Cena ducks a clothesline attempt. Massive lariat. Chris Masters can barely stand. Here it comes - FU. 1....2...3, it's finished.
Chez's Notes: Good win makes the champ look strong

John Cena wins and celebrates to a huge roar from the crowd. But then The Great Khali stands behind him ready to attack with the Double Handed Chokeslam. Cena turns around and...

No Chance!

Vince McMahon arrives to ruin procedings for Khali, who walks back from his attack on Cena. Vince enters the ring to deliver what is an unexpected announcement.

Vince: You see, this is what happens when there is no leadership. Things go wrong. I have been busy dealing with other things and therefore Raw and ECW have been left leaderless and havoc has ensued. That is why tonight I have decided it is time to name a new General Manager for Raw. In making this decision, I would like the Executive Assistant, Jonathan Coachman, to please come to the ring.

Coach's music hits as he swaggers to the ring eagerly. The crowd boo him heavily.

Vince: Now Coach, you have been second in command around here for a while now. So I thought it would be the best thing when appointing a new GM for Raw to get you down. You see after all the work you have done for the show I thank you and I now tell you that you Coach, will not be the General Manager of Raw!

The crowd are pleased as Coach is taken aback, expecting to be named as GM.

Vince: No Coach, your work has not been good enough. Matches such as this tonight were always going to cause trouble. For that reason, as Executive Assistant, Coach, YOU'RE FIRED! Get out of my ring now!

Coach reels back and out of the ring in disbelief as the crowd start a "Goodbye" chant!

Vince: The man who I will name as GM is a legend. He knows Raw inside and out, he knows this business inside and out. He has done it all. Here is the new GM of Raw!

There is a pause as the crowd take in air when...

IF YAAAAA SMEEEEEEEEL, WHAT THE ROCK IS COOKING!

The crowd go mental as Rocky returns to the WWE. The People's Champion and new GM walks down to the ring, mic in hand and shakes Vince's hand.

Rock: Finally The Rock has come back to Orlando!

Huge cheer

Rock: Now I have to tell you that his show, Monday Night Raw, will be completely revolutionised. The Rock wont take any *BEEP* from any of you guys. This is The Rock's show. So The Rock will start with you, you 7-foot monkey. The Rock thinks you're gettin too many chances to lay the smackdown on the champ so as of next week you and your jabronies don't wrestle him unless The Rock says so! Ther is no way, and The Rock means no way that these type of matches will happen again.

Khali's restraint gets a big cheer as Rocky continues

Rock: And while The Great One is here he may as well make some big matches for draft night next week here on Raw where on The Rock's show guys from Raw, guys from Smackdown and guys from ECW will go one on one for a chance to make a draft for their brand. Well the main event for The Great One's debut show is going to be a 10-man battle royal for 2 whole draft picks. Not only that, but The Rock says that we will have a champion's match, John Cena, Bobby Lashley and Edge going head to head for a draft pick.

The crowd roars for the huge matches on for next week.

Rock: If ya smeeeel! What The Rock is cooking!

The show ends with The Rock stood high on a turnbuckle with Cena on another holding his title in the air. Khali and co have gone back to the locker room.


Chez's Show Notes
The Good:
The Rock has finally come back to WWE!
Cena/Khali feud is ended nicely
Eugene teaser for next week

The Bad:
Draft warm ups scored low
No real storylines due to impending draft

TV Rating: 7.00

 

[AJ Styles]

Stop copying people, you idea stealing, no RPing bum boy. No wonder there are big MSN conversations where people slag you off, Chez. Your idea stealing doesn't make you any friends. You have to be original, and make some of your own ideas sometimes. k?

 

[pinchinator]

Stop copying people, you idea stealing, no RPing bum boy. No wonder there are big MSN conversations where people slag you off, Chez. Your idea stealing doesn't make you any friends. You have to be original, and make some of your own ideas sometimes. k?

Uncalled for tbh

 

[The Spin]

Can there please be some more pleasant feedback than what I have had to delete. All constructive critisism is greatly appreciated. Thank you.

 

[TheDon]

man, why did you delete jimmy's comment? can you not take critisism? i disagree with him, i think its good (even if not an original idea) but still, he deserves his opinion

 

[The Spin]

I can take and actually want critisism. Jimmy's comment was plain flaming. Even though tis against the rules I have restored it to show people what it was.

How is this unoriginal? Dont you realise that I was the first person to ever do this type of story on Planetcricket? Who am I copying? There is nobody else doing one like this at the moment.

EDIT: Correction Jay/James are doing one, but my point stands that I practically brought this type of story to PC and even this story takes a different approach by including rules in it that I must follow

 

[TheDon]

he just told me that he said to get some original ideas, i didnt know he said that, sorry. but still, his point was it wasnt original, which is isnt tbh. but its still a great story imo. i didnt know he said that, and of course there arnt msn convos about you as that would be bullying. he doesnt even have msn or a computer, so dunno how he would say that