Story Gloucestershire Journey[Glouc VS Derby- Tea- Day 1]

[navin-boss]

They are doing good atm.C'mon guys get some wickets!

And btw Congrats for ya SOTM Award yaar. Hope you can continue this one

 

[khalek]

Congrats on winning the SOTM, Randy

Good start by Worc, we need few wickets.

 

[surendar]

Bowlers need to bend their back little more in search of a break-through If the same situation like now continues for next 10 overs, things will turn even more difficult. Hopefully, a break through comes.

Keep up the good works

 

[Amiya]

A good start by Worces... We gotta need wicket... Kutgw

 

[Bibu07]

Honestly,I didn't understand anything in this thread.......no offense guys :cool:
carry on your work...
As all say "you need wicket" and also "KUTGW"

 

[Highlander999]

As all say "you need wicket" and also "KUTGW"

I know. A couple of members need to start reading stories, intead of just spamming comments. People actually put a lot of effort here, at least give a proper response

 

[gutterman]

worcs doing along very nicley we need our bowlers to stand up here and take some quick wickets. kutgw mate and congrats on winning SOTM

 

[westindies2007]

Thanks Everyone for your Support.
I was unable to update this Story this weekend, so don't think i dump the story after winning SOTM.
I will continue on Monday.

 

[khalek]

Thanks Everyone for your Support.
I was unable to update this Story this weekend, so don't think i dump the story after winning SOTM.
I will continue on Monday.

Hahaha we know you never dump any of your stories without having a poll asking "Should I close this story?"

 

[westindies2007]

10-15
Bladescape and Yogy comes to bowl.

No sucess for Glouc as yet, as both Batsman continue to Dominated this Game.
S Moore Nearing his 50, on 45 and Solanki on 35.

With Worc score at 84 without lost. as they move at 5.6 RpO.

Glouc really need Wickets and fast.

15-20

Celebration, Bladecape got the 1st Wicket of the Day, after a good Partnership.
Solanki is LBW for 46.
As Worc loses ther 1st wicket at 97runs.

100 Runs comes up for Worc in the 18th Over.

50 Runs for S Moore

Bladecape strikes again, as g Hick edge the ball into the slips hand.
he goes for 1

Worc are 101/2

Worc are now 108/2
moving along at a good rate of 5.4RpO, With S Moore out there, he is settled already, Worc would be looking to Score 280+ Run to try and beat Glouc who iss still unbeaten in this tournament.​

 

[JD10]

thats more like it boys and there is no point in spamming it's like he hasn't put 10 pages of complete dribble

 

[Dr. Pepper]

I know. A couple of members need to start reading stories, intead of just spamming comments. People actually put a lot of effort here, at least give a proper response

Couldn't agree more.


I'm basically copying what I said in your other story thread. It has a lot of potential. So much more can be written.

Write in full sentences. For example "Bladescape and Yogy come to bowl" can be turned into "Bladescape and Yogy took over <insert previous bowlers name> in the bowling attack in an attempt to get the breakthrough and end the partnership of S Moore and V Solanki."

Don't centre everything as well. Only centre the images after resizing them to a smaller size. You can do this when you upload the images.

I like the images in it but you could do more pictures in one image, do effects on them and write text. For example "Glouc struggle as partnership rises" in a fancy text.

Now onto commenting on the update:

Although Gloucestershire got two big wickets, they had already done a lot of damage. Worcestershire are in the drivers seat here as Moore is still at the crease hitting them around the park.

 

[westindies2007]

Couldn't agree more.


I'm basically copying what I said in your other story thread. It has a lot of potential. So much more can be written.

Write in full sentences. For example "Bladescape and Yogy come to bowl" can be turned into "Bladescape and Yogy took over <insert previous bowlers name> in the bowling attack in an attempt to get the breakthrough and end the partnership of S Moore and V Solanki."

Don't centre everything as well. Only centre the images after resizing them to a smaller size. You can do this when you upload the images.

I like the images in it but you could do more pictures in one image, do effects on them and write text. For example "Glouc struggle as partnership rises" in a fancy text.

Now onto commenting on the update:

Although Gloucestershire got two big wickets, they had already done a lot of damage. Worcestershire are in the drivers seat here as Moore is still at the crease hitting them around the park.

Thanks this is what I really want from My reader, to find what i can improve in my Story, I will see what I can do in my next update, Thank mate, and please do keep reading, so i can continue to improve my Story.

 

[gutterman]

we need to take some more wickets. to slow that run rate down. at the moment s moore is their danger man and we need his wicket quickly

 

[Amiya]

Worcestershire are going at a huge score atm. We gotta need few quick wickets to have our chances alive in this match. The next 10overs will be crucial. Kutgw