Story 'N' Einstein Story - FP T20 vs Glam - Part 1

[surendar]

Though I have been reading this silently, I never realized that serious matches will take place so soon. I expected Hmarka-MaD comedies to continue

Anyways, impressive start to the story. One suggestion - Change the font on the picture which you used to narrate the happenings. The readability of the fonts also needs attention while experimenting them.

 

[Varun]

That Einstein! If he would have stayed in and played patiently he could have got a hundred. I bet, Raina will score a 150 next match and Napoleon would be a duck!

 

[BKB1991]

Despite being the topscorer some reckless stuff from Einstein

 

[Aditya]

Oh central zone! Well played Einstein,hope Central Zone win their next match. Impressive presentation i must say,cricinfo scorecard looks brilliant! Keep it up dude.

 

[TheGreemSim]

A fifties a fifty no matter how you get it.

 

[Ollie_H]

Oh central zone! Well played Einstein,hope Central Zone win their next match. Impressive presentation i must say,cricinfo scorecard looks brilliant! Keep it up dude.

I didn't actually make the scorecard, it's a real scorecard of a real match

Well done Aditya.

 

[MaD]

Jimmy Grover?

Hello?
Hey Einstein! Hows it goin my man!
It's all good bro!
Do you know me?
No, I was just goin along...
Right... anyhow, the names Grover, Jimmy Grover
Good for you!
Hell yes! Good for you too! Coz i'm your new manager!
Uh... no you're not...
Yes I am!
When did this happen?
Just a few seconds ago
Ok look Jimmy, I have no idea who you are, what do you want?
Let me introduce myself, the names Grover, Jimmy Grover
You already said that part
shhh! I'm a rookie manager and I need a career to manage, i've been observing various young stars and I reckon, I can make you big!
I don't really need a manager right now, anyway I can't afford you
Oh yes you can, i'm just lookin for experience
But why do I need a manager, go find some big time player
Oh my... you underestimate yourself Einstein, look, here's the deal, I need you as much as you need me
And why's that?
Think about it, what are you in the cricketing world?
A struggling player trying to make it big?
Exactly! And i'm a rookie manager, I could've chosen any other cricketers, but i've chosen you, you have what it takes to be big and i'm here to help you!
For free?
Yes!
So why exactly do I need you?
Tell me Napoleon, what're you doin tomorrow?
I dunno
Exactly, i'll be your personal secretary, organise doctor's appointments, meetings and anything from schedule to driver!
Hmmm, so where and when do we meet?
Meet me at Jastine Park on Butterworth Road, see ya there!

Well that went well, this better not be some phony or ima be pretty damn pissed!

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Ah Napoleon!
And you must be Jimmy...
Indeed I am! So you ready to do this?
Do what?
Make me your manager...
Yeah
Alright! I believe you have a training session tomorrow, starts at 10.30 at Krishnan Park, come over to my place when it's over, i'll sms you the address
Rightio, why couldn't you tell me on the phone?
2 reasons, I wanted you to see me in person and I come here everyday so it's convinient
Well it wasn't for me!
... See ya tomorrow Einstein
See ya!​

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[riz7khan12]

:laugh, a manager :laugh:laugh what a lucky guy, getting a manager for free. hope this guy somehow scams napoleon . another great update

btw love the Sig..

 

[BKB1991]

Jimy Grover looks fishy tbh, I reckon he has other intentions.

 

[Varun]

Good for NE getting a manager ... for free. Yeah, BKB's right, he might have other intentions.
For the sig, I think you could use Napoleon's pic on left and Einstein's pic on the right side.Till now a brilliant story!

 

[MaD]

Training with CZ

Hey Coach!
Ah! Einstein! Welcome!
Thanks
So, get in there!
Where?
Gimme 4!
4?
Just go do laps!
Right!

It's always a great feeling going on a run, I love it! Just release all your anger, that sweat coming down onto everyones body...mmmmm... WTF is wrong with me! I'm a tough kid! Tougher than all these other noobs here anyway! Can't believe no body even got near to my score, pretty epic really, great to know that all these pro old guys suck and I can own them...

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Alright guys, that'll do, tired are we? Well, that's just the beginning! Today's training session is going to end at different times for everyone, you'll all get a go in the nets and once i'm satisfied you can leave. The last match was pretty epic, you gotta admit, am I wrong?
No Rocky
Exactly, so first up, Einstein, I wanna see you bowl!
Uh... a'ight
And Suresh, pad up, you to'll be facing each other

Well that's just great, facing the best batsman in the team, and I don't even remember the last time I bowled! Gotta do what I can...

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Ok, not the best start, Suresh looks in a pretty hectic form!
Come on Einstein, you can do better than that!
I wish I could... i'm tryin as hard as I freakin can! It's just way too hard for me to get into the spin, I shoulda practiced more, Great! Here comes Rocky...

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Oh my god! What was he writing down? I better not be bowling for this match! Surely not!
I don't think you're goin to be bowlin for this match Napoleon...
Yeah, i'm not in the best of form
I hope not, we'll be practicing
Great
Continue for a little longer and then pad up and we'll change pairs
Rightio

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Had enough?
Hell yes!
Thanks for the fun time
I bet you did
Hopefully i'll get to face you again
Hopefully not!

Alright Einstein, go pad up, Sudeep'll be bowlin to you
Alright

I guess that's not too bad, hopefully I can scare him a little!

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Now thas what i'm talkin bout! The ultimate start right here, can anybody stop him? Napoleon Einstein takes wins the match with a 6! That's a beauty I must say, not to Sudeep ofcourse, he looks pretty steamed up, already, but I like!

Another one! That's just the way it's done!

Keep em straight boy!
Yeah, yeah

Hehe, don't you just love playin with em!

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I can only get better! Owned, owned owned! No wonder why Sudeep got owned, all his balls are way off line, now this is a bowler that needs to be trained!

Come on Sudeep, you can do better than that!
Enjoy the moment Einstein!
Oh I am!

Even though I was tonkin the crap put of him, the rare smile came now and then, it was great to see, just smiled right back im, maybe a wink?

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Somebody stop me! I'm just on a roll here, unstoppable!

Oh come on, gimme a real ball!
It'll come, it'll come

Rocky even saw that one, I could see he was pretty impressed!

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Oooh! That smacked right into my elbow, it was killing like hell!

Are you alright Einstein?
Uhhh... yeah i'm fine
Are you sure?
Yeah, just keep bowling

I could feel the pain and it wasn't pretty nice, this one was here to stay but I couldn't stop now, I had to keep going!

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Oh my, I don't think I can bat anymore, it's just killing me, and i've already been bowled like 3 times, I can barely hit the ball, this is lookin bad...

You wanna finish Einstein?
Yeah, I think we better end it
Alright

I saw that hit, are you alright?
Yeah.. uh.. i'm fine, it's nothing
You sure?
Yeah, it'll et better by the match
Let's hope so coz it's a very important one
Yeah it will
Keep in mind Napoleon, make sure you tell me if it's not good so that I can replace you
Yeah I will
Alright then, see you at the match
Bye

I couldn't help but lie, my elbow was killing me, but could I afford to miss out on this match? I'm sure it'll be better by the match, I should just concentrate on the game for now and get some good rest.

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[pcfan123]

Too much cricket now, Napoleon needs a girlfriend (or a boyfriend/ whatever is his fancy)

 

[Mihir Doshi]

Nice Update mate!!

one Suggestion though : If you can use Cricket Revolution for showing practice will be great as that will improve your presentation as well as some more shots!!

Mihir Doshi added 2 Minutes and 32 Seconds later...

Hey mate injured elbow!! Better not play next match or else you might increase your injury

 

[Varun]

Good update man! That Grover is surely working out him and with a elbow injury now, Einstein is going to hospital.:sarcasm
Good to see Raina bat right handed.:sarcasm

 

[riz7khan12]

should go to Dr. Nick if you wanna play next match