Story PC Journey to Test Status [DIV 1: VS Oman]

[Gaurav_7]

Come on guys, this is no friendly series for us!

 

[Prats]

Well, they are in good position currently. Good to get Warner early. I would like to tell the captain to avoid me from bowling. I don't bowl good

 

[Gaurav_7]

I just love you!

 

[westindies2007]

Over 11.
Twentyten return to one of his best bowlers. Puneethkumar who isnt having a good
day today. he will bowl his 3rd over.

10.1 Puneethkumar to Ferguson - No Ball -Oh dear, Puneethkumar is really off color today
10.2 Puneethkumar to Ferguson - 0 Run - Yorker, Ferguson defended it .
10.3 Puneethkumar to Ferguson - OUT - Puneethkumar Strikes. A Bouncer, Ferguson try to get out of the way, the
ball just hit the top edge of the bat , to Randy Red, who toke an easy catch.
CJ Ferguson goes for 13.
Australia's 5th wicket goes down for 88 runs.
(That) brings M Hussey to the crease

10.4 Puneethkumar to Hussey- 1 run - cut away for a single.
10.5 Puneethkumar to White - 1 run - swept away for a single.
10.6 Puneethkumar to Hussey - 0 run - defend
10.7 Puneethkumar to Hussey - 0 run - hit straight back the bowler.
A Very good over from Puneethkumar after his first spell, he shows some aggression in this over, only 3 run came from this over with a wicket.

Over 12.
U Twentyten turns to himself for the 12th over.

11.1 Twentyten to White - 2 run - on drive for two runs.
11.2 Twentyten to White - 2 run - Drive for two runs.
11.3 Twentyten to White - 1 run - swept away for a single
11.4 Twentyten to Hussey - 2 run - Straight Drive for two runs
11.5 Twentyten to Hussey - 0 run - Swing and miss.
11.6 Twentyten to Hussey - 0 run - Defences with full face of the bat for no run

Over 13.
Twentyten bring back Airey who went for 16 run in his first over.

12.1 Airey to White - 1 Run - Drive for a single
12.2 Airey to Hussey - 0 Run - Defences with full face of the bat for no run
12.3 Airey to Hussey - 0 run - Sweep straight to a fielder.
12.4 Airey to Hussey - SIX - Hussey step down the wicket, hitting the ball over Deep cover for a six
12.5 Airey to Hussey - 0 run - Defences with full face of the bat for no run
12.6 Airey to Hussey - 2 run - straight drive for two runs.

Over 14.
U Twentyten to contiue
13.1 Twentyten to White - FOUR - Cover drive for runs
13.2 Twentyten to White - 1 Run - straight drive for a single.
13.3 Twentyten to Hussey - 2 run - Drive for two runs
13.4 Twentyten to Hussey - No ball - No ball a big step over, by the captain.
13.5 Twentyten to Hussey - FOUR - Straight drive for four runs.
13.6 Twentyten to Hussey - FOUR - Cover drive for four more.
13.7 Twentyten to Hussey - 2 run - How about driven stright for a couple of runs
What an over for Australia getting 18 runs from it or What an over from Australian point of view milking 18 runs from it).
Poor bowling here from the Captain.

Australia are now 124 for 5 with 6 overs remain.

Twentyten turns to his wicket taking Bowler F Patel who have two overs remaining in his quota
he toke 2 wickets for 12 runs.

Over 15.
14.1 Patel to White - OUT - Patel didnt let down his captain, as White goes, for 47 runs after facing 27 balls.

Australia are now 124 for 6, as Krejza comes in to bat.
14.2 Patel to Krejza- FOUR - on drive for four
14.3 Patel to Krejza - OUT - a Bouncer, just hit the glove of the batsman into Hedger hand at slip.
Patel yet again performing very good for PC, he now have 4 wickets.
this match is turning around here, as Johnson come out to bat and Australia are 128 for 7.

14.4 Patel to Johnson - Wide - too far off side for a wide.
14.5 Patel to Johnson -1 run - drive for a single
14.6 Patel to Hussey - OUT - 5 wickets for Patel. Patel is singlehandedly demolishing Australia batting line up again.
Dj bowled for 23 runs.
Australia are 130 for 8. this is a very good over from Patel.

It seems Twentyten wants to finish things off as he gives the ball to Randy Red who is amongst wickets..

Over 16.
15.1 Red to Johnson - 0 run - defended.
15.2 Red to Johnson - FOUR - Drive for four runs.
15.3 Red to Johnson - OUT - Straight, Fast and right at the stumps, Johnson gets clean bowled for mere 5 runs.

After been in a good position, Australia is just slipping away here,
they are now 134 for 9.
Harris come out to bat.

15.4 Red to Harris -0 run - Defences with full face of the bat for no run
15.5 Red to Harris - 1 run - drive for a single.
15.6 Red to Siddle - 1 run stright drive for a single.

What a come back by Planet Cricket.
Twentyten is going to Bowl out Patel.
Just 1 wicket needed 5 for 18 Runs what a performance, he would like to get the 6th wicket.

Over 17.
16.1 Patel to Harris - OUT - - thats the 6th one for Patel. the ball swings away from Harris as he tries to drive it through the off side. Getting the edge of the bat to the hands of Hedger.
HE (He) goes for 1.

And Australia are all Out for 136.

At one take Australia were cruising to very challenging Total, but a Very good over by F Patel change the whole course of this match.

Now it's up to the batsmen for PC to win this series for them.
Australia is going to come hard at them.

-Thanks to Great India for Correcting me

 

[RPHKR]

I've a wicket at-least. Fenil took 6 wickets!

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130+ score will be easy for our batsmen.
They can score it in 10 overs!!

 

[Fenil]

Australia are now 124 for 5 with 6 overs remain.

Twentyten turns to his wicket taking Bowler F Patel who have two overs remain.
he toke 2 wickets for 12 runs.

Over 15.
14.1 Patel to White - OUT - Patel didnt let down his captain, as White goes, for 47 runs after facing 27 balls.

Australia are now 124 for 6, as Krejza come to bat.
14.2 Patel to Krejza- FOUR - on drive for four
14.3 Patel to Krejza - OUT - a Bouncer, just hit the glove of the batsman in to Hedger hand at slip.
Patel yet again performing very good for Pc, he now have 4 wickets.
this match is turning around here, as Johnson come out to bat and Australia are 128 for 7.

14.4 Patel to Johnson - Wide - to far off side for a wide.
14.5 Patel to Johnson -1 run - drive for a single
14.6 Patel to Hussey - OUT - 5 wickets for Patel. Patel single handle is demolishing Australia batting line up again.
Dj bowled for 23 runs.

Wow! What an over there. Poor Aussies had much trouble facing my fearsome bowling. Loved the way, bowlers once again stood up to the occasion.

Hey Randy, you need to work a lot on your spellings, my friend. There are plenty of spelling mistakes there. If you want, I'll highlight your mistakes.

 

[westindies2007]

Wow! What an over there. Poor Aussies had much trouble facing my fearsome bowling. Loved the way, bowlers once again stood up to the occasion.

Hey Randy, you need to work a lot on your spellings, my friend. There are plenty of spelling mistakes there. If you want, I'll highlight your mistakes.

sure i would love that,trying to improve my English. thanks.

 

[Dipak]

Why don't you use spell-check mate??

 

[RPHKR]

There isn't spell check for names!

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A suggestion, Don't hurry up for an update.
Check line by line when you complete typing.
This will prevent you from wrong spellings.

 

[Fenil]

Over 11.
Twentyten return to one of his best bowlers. Puneethkumar who isnt having a good
day today. he will bowl his 3rd over.

10.1 Puneethkumar to Ferguson - No Ball - Oh dear, Puneethkumar is really off (color) today.
10.2 Puneethkumar to Ferguson - 0 Run - Yorker, Ferguson defended it .
10.3 Puneethkumar to Ferguson - OUT - Puneethkumar Strikes. A Bouncer, Ferguson try (tries) to get out of the way. The
ball just hit the top edge of the bat, to Randy Red, who toke an easy catch.
CJ Ferguson goes for 13.
Australia's 5th wicket goes down for 88 runs.
(That) brings M Hussey to the crease.

10.4 Puneethkumar to Hussey- 1 run - cut away for a single.
10.5 Puneethkumar to White - 1 run - sweep (It should have been swept) away for a single.
10.6 Puneethkumar to Hussey - 0 run - defend (You could have used Defended by Hussey or Defences with full face of the bat for no run or something like that)
10.7 Puneethkumar to Hussey - 0 run - hit straight back the bowler.
A Very good over from Puneethkumar after his first spell, he shows some aggression in this over, only 3 run came from this over with a wicket.

Over 12.
U Twentyten turns to Himself (you only use a capital "H" in words like He/Himself when either you are starting a sentence with that word or if you are referring to the almighty and of course Gaurav is no god )for the 12th over.

11.1 Twentyten to White - 2 run - on drive for two runs.
11.2 Twentyten to White - 2 run - Drive for two runs.
11.3 Twentyten to White - 1 run - Sweep (use swept) away for a single
11.4 Twentyten to Hussey - 2 run - Straight Drive for two runs
11.5 Twentyten to Hussey - 0 run - Swing and miss.
11.6 Twentyten to Hussey - 0 run - defend.Same as pointed before.

Over 13.
Twentyten bring back Airey who went for 16 run in his first over.

12.1 Airey to White - 1 Run - Drives(where?) for a single
12.2 Airey to Hussey - 0 Run - defend
12.3 Airey to Hussey - 0 run - Sweep straight to a fielder.
12.4 Airey to Hussey - SIX - Hussey steps down the wicket, hitting the ball over Deep cover for a six
12.5 Airey to Hussey - 0 run - defend
12.6 Airey to Hussey - 2 run - straight drive for two runs.(How about driven stright for a couple of runs? It sounds more professional type in my opinion)

Over 14.
U Twentyten to contiue
13.1 Twentyten to White - FOUR - Cover drive for runs
13.2 Twentyten to White - 1 Run - straight drive for a single.
13.3 Twentyten to Hussey - 2 run - Drive for two runs
13.4 Twentyten to Hussey - No ball - No ball a big step over, by the captain.
13.5 Twentyten to Hussey - FOUR - Straight drive for four runs.
13.6 Twentyten to Hussey - FOUR - Cover drive for four more.
13.7 Twentyten to Hussey - 2 run - drive(where?) for two runs
What an over from Australia 18run.(I guess you mean to convey, What an over for Australia getting 18 runs from it or What an over from Australian point of view milking 18 runs from it).
Poor bowling here from the Captain.

Australia are now 124 for 5 with 6 overs remaining.

Twentyten turns to his wicket taking Bowler F Patel who have two overs remaining in his quota.
he toke 2 wickets for 12 runs.

Over 15.
14.1 Patel to White - OUT - Patel didn't let down his captain, as White goes, for 47 runs after facing 27 balls.

Australia are now 124 for 6, as Krejza comes in to bat.
14.2 Patel to Krejza- FOUR - on drive for four
14.3 Patel to Krejza - OUT - a Bouncer, just hit the glove of the batsman into Hedger's hand at slip.
Patel yet again performing very good for PC, he now have 4 wickets.
this match is turning around here, as Johnson comes out to bat and Australia are 128 for 7.

14.4 Patel to Johnson - Wide - too far off side for a wide.
14.5 Patel to Johnson -1 run - drive for a single
14.6 Patel to Hussey - OUT - 5 wickets for Patel. Patel (is) single handle (singlehandedly) is demolishing Australia batting line up again.
Dj bowled for 23 runs.
Australia are 130 for 8. this is a very good over from Patel.

Twentyten seem he wants to finish off Australia as he give the ball tho his next wicket taking bowler Red. You should have used, "It seems Twentyten wants to finish things off as he gives the ball to Randy Red who is amongst wickets.

Over 16.
15.1 Red to Johnson - 0 run - defended.
15.2 Red to Johnson - FOUR - Drive (where?) for four runs.
15.3 Red to Johnson - OUT - Straight, Fast and right at the stumps, clean bowling Johnson for 5 runs (As far as I know, there's no word like "clean bowling". You can use "Johnson gets clean bowled for mere 5 runs.")

After been (being) in a good position, Australia is just slipping away here,
they are now 134 for 9.
Harris come out to bat.

15.4 Red to Harris -0 run - defended.
15.5 Red to Harris - 1 run - drive for a single.
15.6 Red to Siddle - 1 run stright drive for a single. (How about Drives straight for a single?)

What a comeback (comeback is one word, post it toghether) by Planet Cricket.
Twentyten is going to Bowl out Patel.
Just 1 wicket needed 5 for 18 Runs what a performance, he would like to get the 6th wicket as PC is only one wicket away from the win.

Over 17.
16.1 Patel to Harris - OUT - thatsthe 6th one for Patel. the ball swings away from Harris as he try (tries) to drive it (through the off side?) hitting (getting) the edge of the batin (bat) theto (to) the hands of Hedger.
HE (He) goes for 1.

And Australia are allOUT (all out) for 136.

At one take Australai (Australia) were crusing (cruising) to very challeging (challenging) Total (total)[/B] but a Very (very) good over by F Patel Change (changed) the whole course of this match.

Now it's up to the batsmen for PC to win this series for them.
Australia is going to come hard at them.[/COLOR]

Well, here I've pointed out the grammatical mistakes, spellings and also suggested a better way to form a sentence. Hope this will help you and you'll learn a thing or two from it. Take it as a positive criticism and a chance to learn and not as a drawback. Use spell checker so that spelling mistakes gets to minimum and if you need any help about sentence formation, grammar and all, feel free to contact me. I'd be more than happy to assist you, my friend.

 

[Dipak]

Lol, that so many mistakes spotted. I suggest you do a spell check when it comes to words. (whenever you get that red-line. Right click on it and you will have options for the correct spellings)

 

[Fenil]

There isn't spell check for names!

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A suggestion, Don't hurry up for an update.
Check line by line when you complete typing.
This will prevent you from wrong spellings.

At least its there for words like Australia and all. Spelling errors (except the names of the players) can be known quite easily. A red curving line will appear below a word which is wrongly spelt.

 

[Gaurav_7]

Oh yes, take that Aussies! Come on guys, just chase that down already!

 

[westindies2007]

Well, here I've pointed out the grammatical mistakes, spellings and also suggested a better way to form a sentence. Hope this will help you and you'll learn a thing or two from it. Take it as a positive criticism and a chance to learn and not as a drawback. Use spell checker so that spelling mistakes gets to minimum and if you need any help about sentence formation, grammar and all, feel free to contact me. I'd be more than happy to assist you, my friend.

haha yeah I Love criticism. It will help me improve things and thanks, also thanks everyone for giving me some suggestion.
I was never good in English always Failed at school.
Hopefully as time goes by i get better in Grammar, so that this Story will be very good for people to read it.

Again in the future If i makes more mistake Please feel free to point out my mistakes. I am going to update this now haha.

 

[Fenil]

Randy, the best thing to improve your commentary posting skills is visit yahoo or cricinfo when a match is on and go through their commentary style. It will do a world of good for improving your statement structuring and all.