Story Team India- Men in Blue's Diary||Indian Tour to New Zealand-//Australia VS India, First Innings//-

[Prithvi]

Thanks for the feedback mad. I'm thinking to follow you. Btw, can you kindly suggest colors.

 

[AbhishekS]

Well, Dhoni does not need rest, he actually needs time for commercials.:sarcasm
But, that is nice as well, as India gets the most promising leader to lead them once again, Virender Sehwag.

 

[MaD]

I honestly think black will do Keep updating!

 

[yashwanth kumar]

Good update Manish Pandey a new entry and P.Patel back ...... selectors giving chance to some players and good for both players and The selectors

@Selectors : Trying to find a gem for 2011 WC
@Players : To make a mark in the 15 members squad

Feedback : I think Praveen is not in the Touring squad but i don't know why he is with the team ......... oh may be a BOWLING COACH ..... :laugh

 

[Prithvi]

I'm forgetting praveen every time I announce the squad:laugh

 

[WubbaLubbaDubDub]

Also yashwanth has forgot... that world cup is in 2011 and not in 2012

 

[yashwanth kumar]

^ I just edited it now ...:laugh :laugh :laugh

 

[Prithvi]

2012 even has a twenty twenty world cup. So you were not wrong

 

[Prithvi]

Guys, this is to note that this story will not be updated regularly because of my personal issues. We'll relive our previous flow from Mid March, 2010.
Sorry for making you disappoint. But I'll update if I get some time to spear.

 

[Prithvi]

*Series Washed Away*

 

[AbhishekS]

Nice Update Binnu!
Awesome Presentation, even while writing!
I loved the colour coding.
I hope that CSA allows India the Pro40 Match, it'll really be useful.

Anyways, thanks for the credits. It would be fine if you wouldn't have given too.

 

[WubbaLubbaDubDub]

Good Update Binnu.. KIU

 

[Gaurav_7]

Awesome Presentation, even while writing!
I loved the colour coding.

To be very frank,I have got a pain in my eyes after reading that sort of writing.Really can't imagine this was awarded Story of the Month.Were other stories which were competing that bad?

 

[Prithvi]

Lol. I did write up with lime color as planet cricket has that color. Pc's color combination is used in all the stuff related to pctv.(black and lime)

 

[Highlander999]

Ok Binnu in regards to your VM about how to improve:

- Paragraphs. Put a space between new paragraphs
- Best to stick to 2, possibly 3 colours max in the update and tbh, that lime is horrible.
- I know it isn't your first language, but your English can be rather poor in certain areas. Arslaan offered to go over people's works who don't speak English as their first language, I suggest you take him up on that offer as I am struggling to understand it so he might be able to help out

Hope that helps