tonka998
Club Cricketer
Dreadful from Gloucs but a gr8 performance from you there! Definitely MOM! 

Just some criticism as its all been about cooky maybe one of the good members gets in trouble or cooky gets in trouble but blames it on one of the good guys. Maybe Cooky doesnt do anything and one of the other guys does but Cooky ends out getting into trouble because he's known as the trouble maker. Also id like a twist like one of your players in your team has severe depression and wants to kill himself(instead of it being fake like hooper). Maybe one of your team members gay (in real world most likely to be you) and the team have an uproar about it and the board gets in.
So many choices but anyway im loving your story.