pinchinator
International Cricketer
pinchinator presents- A West Indies Story
after reading other peoples storys on this forum mainly Azza! and treva storys
i decided to do my second story to read my first go here http://www.cricketweb.net/forum/showthread.php?t=17541
so heres my planet cricket story writing debut
the West Indian squad for the one day series
C.Gayle, D.Smith, B.Lara, S.Chanderpaul, R.Sarwan, S.Campbell, R.Jacobs, C.Baugh, D.Bravo, C.Hooper, V.Drakes, D.Mohammed, R.Cunningham, J.Lawson, C.Collymore
the team line up
1.C.Gayle 2.S.Campbell 3.B.Lara (c) 4.S.Chanderpaul 5.R.Sarwan 6.R.Jacobs (keeper) 7.D.Bravo 8.V.Drakes 9.D.Mohammed 10.R.Cunningham 11.C.Collymore
managers thoughts: poor bowling poor fast bowling good spin bowling though
your thoughts: feedback, tips, was it bad? mediocore? or good ?
might've being good if i remebered the pic
after reading other peoples storys on this forum mainly Azza! and treva storys
i decided to do my second story to read my first go here http://www.cricketweb.net/forum/showthread.php?t=17541
so heres my planet cricket story writing debut
the West Indian squad for the one day series
C.Gayle, D.Smith, B.Lara, S.Chanderpaul, R.Sarwan, S.Campbell, R.Jacobs, C.Baugh, D.Bravo, C.Hooper, V.Drakes, D.Mohammed, R.Cunningham, J.Lawson, C.Collymore
the team line up
1.C.Gayle 2.S.Campbell 3.B.Lara (c) 4.S.Chanderpaul 5.R.Sarwan 6.R.Jacobs (keeper) 7.D.Bravo 8.V.Drakes 9.D.Mohammed 10.R.Cunningham 11.C.Collymore
managers thoughts: poor bowling poor fast bowling good spin bowling though
your thoughts: feedback, tips, was it bad? mediocore? or good ?
might've being good if i remebered the pic
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