[Team Thread] Willow Wanderers - Season 2010

lol grammar mistake in your quote and it doesn't all fit in
 
That is an excellent first post, I must say. But it won't matter when we get down to the real business in the real season. I hope we meet you in the final though - I'm up for having a rivalry ;)
 
lol grammar mistake in your quote and it doesn't all fit in

Can't able to understand what you want to say but it is written by Ollie so grammar mistake belongs to him.

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S2Y, the paragraph doesn't fit because it missed out the last part of the phrase, 'Together Everyone Acheives More' where it just read 'Together Everyone.'

Team for tomorrow coming up, will be an experimental side with people who haven't had a good go yet getting a game. I won't be here for tomorrow or Saturday's game so best of luck boys and let's get a tournament win under our belt! This is the place to be.
 
Can't able to understand what you want to say but it is written by Ollie so grammar mistake belongs to him.

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I think he is referring to 'the team ethos and based', should be of? And that at the end it only says Together Everyone.. then is cut off.
 
S2Y, the paragraph doesn't fit because it missed out the last part of the phrase, 'Together Everyone Acheives More' where it just read 'Together Everyone.'

Team for tomorrow coming up, will be an experimental side with people who haven't had a good go yet getting a game. I won't be here for tomorrow or Saturday's game so best of luck boys and let's get a tournament win under our belt! This is the place to be.

I think he is referring to 'the team ethos and based', should be of? And that at the end it only says Together Everyone.. then is cut off.

Both will corrected soon so no worries.
 
Fixed up the grammatical and spelling errors, use this paragraph S2Y. Honestly Ollie, where did you learn to speak English? :p

Front post looks fantastic. We are also gaining enough admiration from w3lshrugby that I think he will be signing up for us soon. ;)

The Willow Wanderers were founded in 2010 by its now owner and captain Ollie Holden. The Willow Wanderers are a team that look to enjoy playing the beautiful game of cricket and also to share some beverages afterwards. Whist we may look like a relaxed outfit, we are not only incredibly talented but also incredibly ruthless and competitive. Every ball is worth fighting for and the outcome should always be how we want it to be. The team ethos is based on the phrase "T.E.A.M. - Together Everyone Achieves More."
 
Yeah will fix it soon.

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If any one want their proper image instead of silhouette, he can PM me his photograph but keep in mind it must be something like a passport or Identity card like image with focus on face.
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If you are making face avatar then please send me avatar with white BG so I can cut image properly.
 
I was referring more to the improper use of the contraction it's instead of the proper its :p
 
Sorry to let you all down in today's game guys, looks like I drank too much alcohol yesterday.:p
 

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