navin-boss
Club Cricketer
Good to see you batting of Collins's ball. 

A lot can be done with this story, it has a lot of potential. You need to work on presentation mate. It's all a mess, resize the images and make them smaller, put them in the centre. Be consistent with your font and text for every update, it'll look better. Write in full sentences as well. If you write in full sentences, you can turn one little delivery into a whole paragraph. Writing is fun once you get yourself into the zone and start concentrating. Enjoy it mate and you'll turn this story into a brilliant one.