Dr. Pepper
Chairman of Selectors
Great update! Loving the drama going on. Who's this mysterious man?! Maybe it's Lennie?
To Russia via...
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treva
ICC Chairman
Brilliant stuff. This is more of a movie than story 
Every update keeps me in suspense. Keep it going mate 
Every update keeps me in suspense. Keep it going mate 
Pakistani Army
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Yet another brilliant read! This is a fantastic story and as Treva said there is suspense in every update which makes this so good.
Reps for you Mr.Jazthemod.
Reps for you Mr.Jazthemod.
shefellover93
Club Cricketer
Excellent story if a bit far fetched
Still wondering who the country is!!!!
Still wondering who the country is!!!!
Jaztheman
Chairman of Selectors
Sorry about there being no update in about 10 days or however long it has been. Will try and update it after I have done my homework or tomorow. Might go to the football quickly now. Then again, might not.
Jaztheman
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"This will teach you to mess with Russia!"
"Russia?"
"Yeah. You've been sent to rescue us, no?"
"Is your name Dimitri McCain?"
"No..."
"Ah damn. Wrong plane."
"This was the only plane..."
"Wrong country then! Oh well..."
In a flash, the window was open and the man was free falling from thousand of feet in the air. We did see a parachute open though, so I think he will be fine. Strange thing to happen though. We looked around in the cockpit; everyone dead. Blood everywhere. A little bit of cheerios on the floor. Safe to say, definitely not your average cockpit.
Mani took the drivers seat. Landkort took the passenger seat. There was just the three of us again; fighting the world, it seemed. Mani, again, knew how to fly the plane. How would he know? This is really annoying me now, I have to ask him.
"Mani. There's been a thought pondering my conscience and I don't think it'll go till I've asked you."
"Then ask me."
"WHO are you and how do you know how to fly foreign planes."
"Pah, you're going to find out anyway, you know those people that we've killed?"
"Yep, I doubt I'll be forgetting them anytime soon either."
"Well they were my ex-employers."
They were his bosses! That would mean he was involved in the third party, attacking Russia. He explained about how Russia secretly attacked his country and how they retaliated, but in the name of China. Leaving lots of clues, leading Russia to believe it was China. It's only a small country, where did they get all the money? Unless China started the big bombs and stuff after. Well his country definitely had something to do with it.
"What country do you 'represent'? Where are we going?"
"Well I can answer that with one answer and that is...
Japan"
"Japan?!"
"Yes Japan."
Japan? We're going to Japan? Well that answers a few questions. He does look Japanese. Maybe he is helping the Russians. But if he is with the Japanese, then why was he helping the Russians and why did he kill his bosses and past workers?
"Why help us?"
"Eh?"
"Why help Russia. And me and Landkort."
"Let's say, I help my friends."
"Friends?"
"Yes. You knew me before your accident. We were rivals, but the best of friends."
I don't understand. I must of known Mani before the crash, he must of played for one of the opposition. The other club in Moscow? I'm sure we'll be staying up late tonight.
Talking that is for all your dirty minded readers!
"Russia?"
"Yeah. You've been sent to rescue us, no?"
"Is your name Dimitri McCain?"
"No..."
"Ah damn. Wrong plane."
"This was the only plane..."
"Wrong country then! Oh well..."
In a flash, the window was open and the man was free falling from thousand of feet in the air. We did see a parachute open though, so I think he will be fine. Strange thing to happen though. We looked around in the cockpit; everyone dead. Blood everywhere. A little bit of cheerios on the floor. Safe to say, definitely not your average cockpit.
Mani took the drivers seat. Landkort took the passenger seat. There was just the three of us again; fighting the world, it seemed. Mani, again, knew how to fly the plane. How would he know? This is really annoying me now, I have to ask him.
"Mani. There's been a thought pondering my conscience and I don't think it'll go till I've asked you."
"Then ask me."
"WHO are you and how do you know how to fly foreign planes."
"Pah, you're going to find out anyway, you know those people that we've killed?"
"Yep, I doubt I'll be forgetting them anytime soon either."
"Well they were my ex-employers."
They were his bosses! That would mean he was involved in the third party, attacking Russia. He explained about how Russia secretly attacked his country and how they retaliated, but in the name of China. Leaving lots of clues, leading Russia to believe it was China. It's only a small country, where did they get all the money? Unless China started the big bombs and stuff after. Well his country definitely had something to do with it.
"What country do you 'represent'? Where are we going?"
"Well I can answer that with one answer and that is...
Japan"
"Japan?!"
"Yes Japan."
Japan? We're going to Japan? Well that answers a few questions. He does look Japanese. Maybe he is helping the Russians. But if he is with the Japanese, then why was he helping the Russians and why did he kill his bosses and past workers?
"Why help us?"
"Eh?"
"Why help Russia. And me and Landkort."
"Let's say, I help my friends."
"Friends?"
"Yes. You knew me before your accident. We were rivals, but the best of friends."
I don't understand. I must of known Mani before the crash, he must of played for one of the opposition. The other club in Moscow? I'm sure we'll be staying up late tonight.
Talking that is for all your dirty minded readers!
Dr. Pepper
Chairman of Selectors
Great update. So I'm an ex-Japanese world destroyer thingy and an ex-footballer? Nice...
treva
ICC Chairman
Good to see another update James! Well who would've thought it? Didn't Japan learn from WWII that nucular bombs are bad?
Great stuff as always Jaz
Great stuff as always Jaz
Jaztheman
Chairman of Selectors
Good to see another update James! Well who would've thought it? Didn't Japan learn from WWII that nucular bombs are bad?
Great stuff as always Jaz
I assume you are on about Nagasaki and Hiroshima, which got bombed during the World War by the Americans? Well lets just say they have started their retalliation a little late. Russia first, America next?
Thanks for the comments, guys.
Pakistani Army
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Nice to see an update Jaz. Hmm....wonder why Japanese. Still an interesting read Jaz. Keep updates like these coming!
shalin_hitter
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this seriously feels as if it is a movie
w3lshrugby
Panel of Selectors
Great work mate, fantastic read from the beginning for me there. Keep it up! 
Jaztheman
Chairman of Selectors
So we stayed up till the early hours of the morning, talking. We spoke about how, even though one of us played for Lokomotiv and one of us played for CSKA, we were hanging out for most of the time. He knew so much about me and even told me about my parents; he'd met them quite a few times when coming over.
Anyhow, we were just coming into Japan when we saw two planes come from no where from either side of us. They were Japanese fighter planes! They must of find out what happened to their crew. But how? Well they must of had a place to go and not turned up but still, we're in a predicament here.
"Mani! What do we do?"
"We pick up speed."
And with that we're picked up speed, not a little, a lot. We weren't losing them as bullets were flying everywhere. Hitting our engine and wings most of the time but they were hitting the cockpit more and more as we flew. This was not going well. I looked around, opened the Cockpit door and ran into the back. I noticed there was a door at the very end. I strolled towards it and opened it.
I was now in a turret, protected by shield like protection. I started firing, all my shots going wayward. Bar one, the only shot that hit the plan got right in the engine and it messed up and they must of lost control of their plane and crashed and burned. There was only 3 now.
Mani seemed to be going faster and faster, but we still weren't lost them. We were taking hits, and lots of them. I don't think we could last another 20 minutes when Mani did a somersault which sent the other planes in front of us. Then two rockets came from the front of our plane. One going to one plane and one going to another. Homing rockets! They were now down to one plane as were we. BANG! What was that? I ran to the cockpit to discuss what had just happened. I opened the door when we suddenly started going down at around 65 degree angle. It threw me towards the cockpit.
"Mani..."
"We've been hit. But not by a plane."
"Then what."
"Tanks. I think the Japanese Army is trying to kill us."
"What are our chances?"
"Chances of surviving?"
"Yes."
"Not great, to be honest. But with me at the helm you never know!"
With this he turned around quickly and started heading back for the direction we came in. This took the Army by surprise as they started to fire rapidly. The plane started to chase us but I was back in my turret, and I fired down their last plane! I'm sure this won't be the last plane I'll ever blow up, but for now it'll do.
"Mani."
"Yes."
"Where are we going?"
"Somewhere they'll never guess we'd go."
"Where's that?"
"Russia."
Anyhow, we were just coming into Japan when we saw two planes come from no where from either side of us. They were Japanese fighter planes! They must of find out what happened to their crew. But how? Well they must of had a place to go and not turned up but still, we're in a predicament here.
"Mani! What do we do?"
"We pick up speed."
And with that we're picked up speed, not a little, a lot. We weren't losing them as bullets were flying everywhere. Hitting our engine and wings most of the time but they were hitting the cockpit more and more as we flew. This was not going well. I looked around, opened the Cockpit door and ran into the back. I noticed there was a door at the very end. I strolled towards it and opened it.
I was now in a turret, protected by shield like protection. I started firing, all my shots going wayward. Bar one, the only shot that hit the plan got right in the engine and it messed up and they must of lost control of their plane and crashed and burned. There was only 3 now.
Mani seemed to be going faster and faster, but we still weren't lost them. We were taking hits, and lots of them. I don't think we could last another 20 minutes when Mani did a somersault which sent the other planes in front of us. Then two rockets came from the front of our plane. One going to one plane and one going to another. Homing rockets! They were now down to one plane as were we. BANG! What was that? I ran to the cockpit to discuss what had just happened. I opened the door when we suddenly started going down at around 65 degree angle. It threw me towards the cockpit.
"Mani..."
"We've been hit. But not by a plane."
"Then what."
"Tanks. I think the Japanese Army is trying to kill us."
"What are our chances?"
"Chances of surviving?"
"Yes."
"Not great, to be honest. But with me at the helm you never know!"
With this he turned around quickly and started heading back for the direction we came in. This took the Army by surprise as they started to fire rapidly. The plane started to chase us but I was back in my turret, and I fired down their last plane! I'm sure this won't be the last plane I'll ever blow up, but for now it'll do.
"Mani."
"Yes."
"Where are we going?"
"Somewhere they'll never guess we'd go."
"Where's that?"
"Russia."
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shantanu_rooney
Chairman of Selectors
Nice to see you back updating after two weeks. Last update was great and this is much better. It really looks like a movie. Why dont you produce and direct one.
Its just great keep them coming. Nice reading them
Its just great keep them coming. Nice reading them
Jaztheman
Chairman of Selectors
Nice to see you back updating after two weeks. Last update was great and this is much better. It really looks like a movie. Why dont you produce and direct one.
Its just great keep them coming. Nice reading them
I'm a little too young to produce and direct a film Shantanu.
Cheers for the great comment though, very much appreciated. Hoping to try and get back to regular updates again.
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