You have annoyed me with your constant feedback requests, so here's my honest feedback:
-You have definitely improved from the start
-You need to spend longer on your bats
-Do not try and cut corners with your bats
-Don't give out advice and then not do it yourself (i.e. hand draw where you don't)
-Just keep trying and don't preview absolutely everything
-Don't settle for the minimum, keep trying hard and if there isn't a good picture try making it yourself
-Keep trying and improving
Also:
-Don't cram your thread title
-You need to update your index