Story BBC & England Cricket: The Toss!

[saladguy]

Thanks, I really like yours and Giggity's story too!

 

[formula1man]

great work, its coming along great, pictures are nice (better than mine) and good writing there too. KUTGW

 

[saladguy]

Thanks

Update on Friday!

 

[saladguy]

Live From Edgbaston!

LIVE FROM EDGBASTON!​

David Gower: Hello, my name is David Gower. In the studio with me today is Geoffrey Boycott and Mark Nicholas.

But first in the last couple of minutes the teams have been announced for this 2nd Ten/10 Charity Sheild match. England are unchanged, however Stars XI have made two changes. Dominic Cork and Shaun Udal are out and Gary Pratt and Alex Wharf are in.

So, Geoffrey, what do we know about those two, lets start off with Gary Pratt.

Geoffrey Boycott: Well, if I remember correctly he is the only player in the squad never to be capped by England.

David Gower: So why is he in the squad then?

Geoffrey Boycott: Well, if I can remember correctly he is an excellent fielder, and during the 2005 Ashes Test match at Trent Bridge, he came on as a substitute fielder and ran out Ricky Ponting with a direct hit. And people still talk about three years on! And Ricky Ponting was furious when he discovered that England had a specialist fielder as there substitute!

David Gower: Yes, Mark lets come onto you now, now who is Alex Wharf?

Mark Nicholas: Well, Alex Wharf. He played in the Champions Trophy for England in 2004, and he literally ripped apart and stunned the Australians and knocked them out of the tournament! He could play a big part in today's match!

David Gower: Well now we will cross live to our commentators Michael Atherton and Richie Benaud!

 

[Pakistani Army]

Great pre-match update mate. I can still remember Ponting getting run-out.

Looking forward to the start of the match.

 

[saladguy]

England Off To A Good Start!

England Have Won The Toss, And have Elected To Bat!


England open with Matt Prior and Darren Maddy, who are on a 46 run partnership! There was frustration for the Stars XI bowlers as they failed to make a breakthrough, within the first 5 overs!





Prior and Maddy are going strong, whilst the Stars are crumbling in the Birmingham heat!





Stars XI need a breakthrough and fast!

 

[saladguy]

Just completed the match, expect an update tomorrow!

 

[Pakistani Army]

Great graphics work here mate. You have really improved your updates. As for thr match, the Stars will have to find a breakthrough and fast.

Keep up the great works mate.

 

[saladguy]

Yeah, thanks

I will not be able to update tomorrow as I have just realised that I have some School Work to do and cricket training in the morning!

 

[Highlander999]

I still think you need to make the text smaller and have more writing. Your graphics are really good but as I said earlier, the text is the key to a story.

Keep up the hard work and you will improve

 

[ledzep]

Yeah a bit more text would be nice but i am liking the graphics.

England look to be going strong.

 

[Pakistani Army]

No problems mate. Take your time.

 

[saladguy]

Good news guys! I have realised how to add "Hot-Spot" to my story!

 

[Pakistani Army]

That's great news. Looking forward to the next update mate.

 

[saladguy]

Yeah, the rest of the match is so funny! All we be revealed tomorrow!