Story West Indies Cricket: VS Australia (TEAM selection)

Can West Indies Regain there Fame?

  • Yes: with the new appointed manager.

    Votes: 4 33.3%
  • Maybe: with new youngester coming up, they should be up there soon

    Votes: 4 33.3%
  • No: West indies have along way to go.

    Votes: 4 33.3%

  • Total voters
    12
1st Test
West Indies Played Safe for the 1st Test.
As they pick the More experiance players with 2 new players, S Benn and A Barath who played against Australia.


Here is W.I XI
C Gayle (cap), R Morton, S Chanderpaul, R Sarwan, A Barath, D Bravo, C Baugh, F Edwards, D Sammy, S Benn, J Taylor.


New Zealand XI
D Vettori (cap), P Fulton, J How, R Taylor, B McCullam, J Ryder, J Oram, A Redmond, T Southee, M Gillespie, I O'Brien.


Playing Condition
Bounce: Very Poor for the Bowlers.
Wear: Poor for Spin
Outfield: Average
Light: Very Good.


Who ever win the toss will choose to bat.

Toss: West Indies won the Toss and Selected to bat.


Everyone is Ready, the fielder are out, the umpire are ready and so are the batsman.
C Gayle and Morton open batting.

50 Runs Partnership from the Opening Pair.
Nice Batting.


C Gayle 50 Runs off 87 balls.
He is finally out of his Dry season as he score 50 yet again. C Gayle is finally in form as he is on the Move after score 3 150+runs in the ODI against Aussie. all he came not out also.

100 Runs Partnership.

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At Lunch.
West Indies are 113/0
C Gayle on 73*
Morton on 32*

after lunch.

A Good Partnership comes to an End.
As Morton goes.
Bowled by Gillespie 46.

As West Indies are 149/1


150 Run come up for West Indies.


100 Runs for C Gayle
From 173 balls.
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What a Wicket for NZ, to get out S Chanderpaul is no easy task.
Chanderpaul goes for 19.
As West Indies are 181/2
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R Sarwan comes to bat.

200 Run up for West Indies.

yet another wicket falls for the West Indies.
R Sarwan goes for 6.
C McCullum off the bowling of O Brien.

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West Indies are now 219/3
With New Talent A Barath comes to the crease.
he will be looking for his 1st 100 here.
after his HS 87.

At Tea
West Indies are 223/3
C Gayle 138*
A Barath 2*

great batting by Gayle.

150 Run for Gayle.
It came off 248
Great batting.
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West Indies loses another wicket.
A Barath goes for 19.
LBW Gillespie.

D Bravo comes to bat.

268/4

300 run for West Indies.
West Indies is on the move.
they just need to keep ther wickets in hand and they could be looking for a big score.

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A great performance from Gayle Came to an End.
As he was Caught by O'Brien for 188 off the bowling of Oram.

West Indies are now 309/5

as C Baugh comes to bat.

The Light are really bad. But the Game carry on.
As Bravo and Baugh play defensive shots.

At Stump Day 1.
West Indies are 345/5
Bravo on 32
Baugh 19

A Good day for the West Indies, but they wish they top order would of put up come thing, which the would be 400 run by day end.
 
If I may make a tiny suggestion. Maybe put a bit more description into your updates as they are a bit factual, without really much description.

I think this ICC story by Griffo might be worth looking at. It won SOTM and is based on the same style as yours, however, he just does a wee bit more description. I think if you get that, make the text size 3 and use "bold" a bit more to highlight important facts, this has the potential to be the best ICC story to date.

Good luck :)
 
Great batting from Gayle..WI will reach 400 i hope...

Yeah as Tom said add some more description..I hope you won't take this as a bad comment. :D
 
Thanks Tom, I am Happy you help me. this is what i really want from my reader, to let me know how to improve the Story, so i can make the story interesting for you to read. I will check out that link and improve my story. Thanks Tom
 
Day 2
Session 1


West Indies Had a very Bad start.O Brien Clean up Baugh. He was LBW for 19 and Edwards was Bowled for 10 The score was 7-361

Bravo bring up his Great 50 off 130 balls.
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Sammy and Bravo started to build a great Partnership of 47,
As they push West Indies to 400.
New Zealand Tried every thing, nothing was working out, until O Brien Strikes yet again, as he got Bravo Caught by Fulton for 63.


New Zeland though they had West Indies now, it would be easy to get the final two wicket.
A Partnership between Sammy and Benn Change the thought, As New Zealand try there Best to get West Indies all Out before Lunch.
Both Sammy and Benn were on the move, as they move the Score from 408 to 443 in only 30mins, until Benn was bowled by Oram for 15.

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New Zealand needed 1 wicket, Both Sammy and Taylor survive to Lunch

At Lunch WI are 448/9
Sammy 43
Taylor 0
 
Day 2
Session 2


450 Run up for West Indies.

J Taylor Sky the ball to Redmond off Gillespie.
As West Indies come to an End.

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WI have batted very well to score 450 they are in a great position and now hope their bowling is good.
 
New Zealand come out to bat.

New Zealand start off Ok, as they play Denfesive. As West Indies Strikes.

J Taylor Bowled J How for 13.
NZ are now 28/1
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50 Run up for New Zealand
Both Taylor and Fulton Play save as they Move NZ Pass 50 runs.

West Indies give S Benn and F Edwards the bowling now.

S Benn got a wicket.
R Taylor caught by Sarwan for 9.
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NZ are now 54/2

New Zealand started to slip here.
As Taylor came back on the attack and got a wicket.
He got B MacCullum c Sammy for 3.
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NZ are now 65/3
Fulton is still out there on 39. He should take the strike, and make sure no more wickets Fall.
Because at this rate NZ could be all out before 200.

Tea.
New Zealand have to Settle down now.
They are in a poor Position at the Moment.
68/3 Trail by 384.
With Fulton 41 and J Ryder out there. Both of these need to move up the score and try to get a great partnership here.
25 Over have been Bowled.

West Indies May feel good in this position.
But there is still alot of work to be done.
 
This is looking a lot nicer, however, I still think there is more you could do ;)

Instead of:

New Zealand started to slip here.
As Taylor came back on the attack and got a wicket.
He got B MacCullum c Sammy for 3.

how about

Now New Zealand really began to get into trouble. A fired up Taylor was really charging in, causing the two batsmen all sorts of problems. Eventually Brendon McCullum perished against this onslaught. A straight delivery which seamed slightly away, saw him nick it to Sammy at slip.

New Zealand were now 69/3 and looking very vunerable

Just my opinion :)
 
This is looking a lot nicer, however, I still think there is more you could do ;)

Instead of:



how about



Just my opinion :)
Thank Again, You are been very helpful. (due to my BAd Grammer and so on, i will try my best to Improve it)
 

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