Story Ashes2009 Australia vs England teams playing x11 and overlays previews

[Aditya]

Heres my first story i am new in this forum dont no much but will try to make a great story this is about ashes 2009 give me suggestions and comment on my work may you like it in this story there will be full ashes tour but no domestics like matches with england domestic teams just international fixtures of t20 and one day will declared after i will finish tests as its my first i will give game screenshots tonight please moderators dont close this thread if it has nay wrong this let me know
Fixtures
1st Test: Wednesday 8 July ? Sunday 12 July (Cardiff)

2nd Test: Thursday 16 July ? Monday 20 July (Lords)

3rd Test: Thursday 30 July ? Monday 3 August (Edgbaston)

4th Test: Friday 7 August ? Tuesday 11 August (Headingley)

5th Test: Thursday 20 August ? Monday 24 August (The Oval)

 

[Aditya]

England and wales cricket board with australia cricket board announces 16 man squad for ashes

Ashes Squad
England
Andrew Strauss(C)
james Anderson
Ian Bell
Ravi Bopara
Tim Bresnan
Stuart Broad
Paul Collingwood
Alastair Cook
Andrew Flintoff
Graham Onions
Monty Panesar
Kevin Pietersen
Matt Prior(WK)
Adil Rashid
Ryan Sidebottom
Graeme Swann

Australia
Ricky Ponting(C)
Phillip Hughes
Simon Katich
Michael Clarke
Mike Hussey
Marcus North
Brad Haddin(WK)
Graham Manou
Andrew McDonald
Shane Watson
Stuart Clark
Mitchell Johnson
Brett Lee
Peter Siddle
Ben Hilfenhaus
Nathan Hauritz

Official overlays
India-Starcricket

England-SkySports

Australia-9

1st test is starting soon so boards have decided playing x11 for first test teams are really strong england and australia is working really hard in nets to give best shots

Playing eleven goes as

England
andrew strauss(C)
Alastair cook
Ravi Bopara
Kevin Pietersen
Ian Bell
Paul Collingwood
Andrew Flintoff
Matt Prior(WK)
Graeme Swann
Staurt Broad(SOB)
James Anderson(OB)

Australia
Philip Hughes
Simon Katich
Ricky Ponting(C)
Michael Clarke
Mike Hussey
Marcus North
Brad Haddin(WK)
Mitchell Johnson
Brett Lee
Nathan Hauritz
Stuart Clark

 

[mattfb]

Looks good mate. Maybe a bit of writing on why some of the players were picked etc. Maybe an analysis like they do in real life. Check out these:

Surens story. Plenty of ideas with presentation and tv like presentation.

Jaz's story. Plenty of ideas with the writing.

Nice start mate, but maybe wait until people comment before doing the next update. If you've done an update save it in Microsoft word so then eventually you will have a few updates ready to do and you can take your time if you get what I mean. You don't need to post it as soon as you make it.

 

[Biggy]

Yeah, good job mate. Interesting line ups.

Can't wait for the next installment.

 

[Aditya]

Words from coach andy flower and captain andrew strauss

Flower and strauss talks to media for picking squad

Main question from media was why adil rashid is picked in squad as he was not as good in twenty world cup andy flower replied he is being picked for his spin which can be handy in test matches as per t20 continues all players have their good and bad they in t20 so regarding t20 you can't judge player one of the media person asked strauss that is it good decision to drop foster as per by gloves in twenty world cup andrew strauss replied

he was perhaps good wicketkeeper but his batting was not as best as prior but in ashes there should be keeper which can bat well and can do keepring really well there were many questions but one which was really important was can they remain with ashes trophy so media asked andy flower and andrew strauss that dropping players like vaughan harmison and hoggard which were in last ashes which you won dropping them is it right and taking youngsters like rashid onions is it balancing england team or not strauss replied vaughan not picked because he was not in good form in counties and was not performing not as well also to be picked in international team so he was dropped harmison is having mnay injuries in past so he's been out of team because of that

hoggard again not in good form to be picked in team there been serveral decisson to pick him or not but we decided to pick rashid in place of him as we were getting losed with spinners so the team is strong and we can win it.

 

[Biggy]

Fair calls by the 2 blokes in charge. I think Prior is a much better batsmen than Foster, and it is more of a surprise that Rashid would be picked in a T20 side than a Test side.

 

[Aditya]

Yaa prior is much better batsmen then forster but prior is not as good wicketkeeper as fortser next update will be of toss and talks before match

 

[surendar]

Good start to the story. My suggestion to the starters would be, have a proper story line before you play the game, take the game as per the story line you thought, add pictures of appropriate size ( neither big nor small ) as good storyline pictures with good pictures attract the readers more.


Good luck

 

[hedger_14]

KIU, this is the only time in the game, i've seen hauritz been selected (other than anything im doing)

 

[CricketPlayer55]

Not bad for a start. Better grammar and some more word-formatting would be good. Also, use some more full stops as when I read I suddenly ignore some of the words.

Good luck mate.

 

[Aditya]

Thanks for comments