Story Australia Journey Chappell-Hadlee Trophy - New Zealand v Australia

[Aussie Team]

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New Zealand v Australia at Basin Reserve, Wellington ​

Wicket Keeper wakes up with stiff neck, Main allrounder injured. Aussies off to flying start, is not how Kiwis imagined as they prepared for first of 5 Chappell-Hadlee trophy matches but the remarkable aspects about home team today were their back-up plans, one after another, untill winning runs were hit..

Australia, undefeated for last 4 overs, Favorites and first 4 overs produced runs for no loss, without a fuss. Tim Southee and Shane Bond didn't bowl too bad but balls were hitting sweetest spot of David Warner bat and Shane Watson liked the bounce and pace off Wellington pitch. Bond remained calm, attacked the stumps and Warner missed a straight one and Watson was held out to Jacob Oram trying a rash shot.

Manou was Promoted to number 3, the day in spectacular style when he dived to his right for a one-handed catch to remove the Manou from the fourth ball. Franklin, the first-change, bowled Dussey with his opening delivery to have the hosts 39 for 4 in the four over and he was also involved when Manou (0) was unlucky to be given out lbw. Clarke, a player who is so important to Australian side, was hit on the foot well and goes for four. Finding the boundary was the hard thing for the away side and New Zealand's tight bowling prevented a quick start and a competitive score. A quick stand of 41 for 4 in 5.1 overs between Clarke and White was crucial in gaining some momentum for the hosts, but they quickly fell back and were dismissed on the final ball of the 10 over. Clarke was dismiss for 25 of 26.

Australia 89/6 RR 10.50, Will Hauritz (4) and White (35) make a win for Australia? Who will win the Match? Answer this question and the first five members will win 200,000$ VCash.​

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[just_cricket]

Yes, Haurtiz and White will get them home.
Keep this up mate. Keep trying to improve your writing and if you stick at it, it will get a lot of comments.
Just proof read before you post. You've got a few little errors:

"...bowled Dussey with his opening delivery" and

"Clarke, a player who is so important to Australian side, was hit on the foot well and goes for four." (That doesn't really make sense. Even if its leg byes how did it hit him "well"?)

 

[Aussie Team]

"...bowled Dussey with his opening delivery" and

It was the nick name of David Hussey..

 

[Prithvi]

89/6 is something dangerous.
White is at the crease, increasing the Australian Batting confidence, but Smith has to support him.
And as said by JC, I do agree, Dussey is nick Name of David Hussey, and it would have been great if you have said "David Hussey" because its a story, not our chat.

 

[Aussie Team]

Steven Smith was out mate..

 

[Gorro_124]

New Zealand will win!

 

[Meghraj_17]

Go!Ozies get a win.Hauritz is a good batsmen he might take runs and get white on strike,so Ozie will win.

 

[Aussie Team]

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New Zealand v Australia at Basin Reserve, Wellington ​

After a close match as 83 needed from 60 balls nearly upstaged New Zealand in Wellington, Clarke has said the target made the chase more difficult for Australia.

Jeetan Patel further dismantled the Australia chase in his following two overs as he sent back Steven Smith and then captured the wicket of Michael Clarke, skying to Bond at midwicket (101 for 6). The Aussie's could not revive from this point as New Zealand's strangling, fuller bowling continued to contain them. Cameron White managed to muscle 41 from 25 balls, including five fours, but when the required run-rate topped 9.42 an over with four remaining.

Australia's unique record was set up by an amazing innings by White, whose tentative steps quickly became ones of dominating purpose. He had a patient look early - he even shouldered arms to one ball - before collecting at a one-day international pace and steaming as the innings concluded. White was bowled and Australia hopes comes to an end, he missed his chance for a half-century when He missed the bowl. Hauritz was either out by Franklin, and Bond again had picked up the wicket of Harris.

This was the result Australia lost the match, And New Zealand won the match by 38 runs.

 

[just_cricket]

Mate, it's better but I can't help thinking you've got some text from somewhere else?
Not tryna blame you for anything, but it seems odd that some sentences use a very good cricket vocabulary, and others sound like they were written by Aditya when he was at his worst in his stories (no offence Aditya. I enjoy your recent work)

But everything has improved out of sight, so keep it up!

 

[Aditya]

Yes, I agree with JC. I guess you are trying to write few new words but firstly you should know the meaning of those words. I remember when I started my first story, I didn't knew the meaning of few words but to make my grammar better I added them to the updates which made my grammar even worst. So its better to use simple words rather than trying to use new words and making the writing much more worst. Apart from that the pics for the last update look a bit blurry. Maybe you are resizing them incorrectly make sure when you resize pics you press shift and then resize them.

 

[Aussie Team]

Mate, it's better but I can't help thinking you've got some text from somewhere else?

I didn't get the text somewhere else..
How can you thing?

 

[just_cricket]

Manou was Promoted to number 3, the day in spectacular style when he dived to his right for a one-handed catch to remove the Manou from the fourth ball.

Mate no offence but the bolded is a phrase which is commonly used for cricket writings. And it makes no sense in that sentence.

Anyways kiu

 

[MaD]

All of the phrases that seem 'experienced' and have good vocab are phrases that are used commonly

 

[Aussie Team]

17 Members Squad for ODI series ​

Aussies have Lost the Match against The New Zealand and Have got the Announce for tour of New Zealand, Australian one day squad is a static on, Containing 17 players to participate in 5 match series.


Ricky Ponting is back as the captain of the side although runs have dried up a litle from his bat recently and Michael Clarke, the deputy, Have been in good form in T20. Cameron White, the victorian golf swinger, David Hussey and Michael Hussey the hussler have done most of scoring for Australians and will look to continue their good form in neighbouring country where conditions are almost similar. Shaun March continues to enjoy selectors favours despite repeatedly failing to convert his starts into major innings. Marsh if the first choice to partner Shane Watson. Watson has finally come to terms with his bulky body and his fitness has lot to do with his performances, Both as opening batsman and a 4th choice medium pacer in Playing XI.

With the injury of Brad Haddin, Graham Manou, The wicket keeper, Have been Replaced him.
Steven Smith and James Hopes, the two allrounders that Aussies maneuvered throughout 10 one dayers at home, have both found a place in squad to New Zealand although Hopes did better with bat and ball although Smith is one of the best Bowler in International cricket anyday.


Nathan Hauritz enjoys one man spin show in Australia squad but he must know Kiwi pitches offer even little assistance to finger spinners and he'll have to work extra hard to maintain his position, specially because home team batsmen will pick him out to attack during the match which might give him some easy wickets but can also throw him out of the squad even quicker.


Mitchell Johnson is called back as he is hottest cricketer in Australia right now and will lead Aussie pace bowling attack along with Brett Lee the Right Arm Fast Bowler, Doug Bollinger the accurate first change bowler and Shaun Tait, the underdog story of Aussie summer who has grabbed 38 wickets from 22 games since his surprize recalled to the Australian Squad.

 

[just_cricket]

Much improved presentation and writing mate. Australia looking strong here.

Just one thing: Why does the first pic say Austrailr?