Story England's 2010/11 Ashes Tour-ENG vs AUS - 1st Test - ENG 91/2 Lunch

[Chater1703]

Ashes Tour - ENG vs S.A, Day 3 Lunch

England vs South Australia Day 3 Morning Session

England under pressure as top order collapses

England 80/6

Pietersen 24*
Chater 1*

Watch highlights of the morning session here

(with the highlights I had to start a new match as my save broke so just remember that you have to add 18 to the score lol)

Scorecards

 

[HawkAussie]

3 bolwers in 36 overs. That is good hope it lands in a draw.

 

[Aditya]

England in deep trouble now. They need to reach to a respectable total. Pietersen needs to play a good hand here to make sure that England at least reach to a total of 150.

 

[Chater1703]

Ashes Tour - ENG vs S.A, Day 3 Tea

England vs South Australia Day 3 Afternoon Session

South Australia chase 211 runs to win after bowling England out for 169


South Australia 23/1

Klinger 10*
Harris 9*

Watch Highlights of the Afternoon Session here

Scorecards

South Australia 2nd Innings

Scorecards

 

[surendar]

Excellent efforts, but I would suggest just a summary of those practice games and detailed stuffs like above for the main games. Anyways, it's upto the writers' comfortness in the end.

 

[Chater1703]

Ashes Tour - ENG vs S.A, Day 3 Stumps

England vs South Australia Day 3 Evening Session

Late wickets set up exciting final day as South Australia end Day3 on 97/4


South Australia 97/4

Blizzard 9*
Manou 1*

Watch Highlights of the Evening Session here

Scorecards

 

[surendar]

2 more wickets in the next session might take the match in more interesting way. Hope rain doesn't interfere

 

[Roofrom50]

Don't think we have anything to worry about the rain Surendar, i believe it will hold off. South Australia, i don't think they can make the runs required to win this match. Most of their batting order has passed, and now they are into their tail enders. Should be a interesting 20 minutes in the next session which may determine the match.

 

[Dutchmen]

I personally liked the banner of your upgrade. it's looking excellent

 

[Chater1703]

Ashes Tour - ENG vs S.A, South Australia win by 1 wicket

England vs South Australia Day 4 End of Match

South Australia secure memorable win with Last Wicket Partnership

South Australia win by 1 Wicket

South Australia 214/9
Manou 56*
Lang 26*

Watch Highlights of Day 4 here

Scorecards

 

[6ry4nj]

I think you would be better served by not giving the summary of each update at the start. If you really want to tell us the end of the story up front, how about putting it in one of those spoiler text boxes?

I can see that the newspaper-report format is fairly standard on this forum and a newspaper headline summarizes the story and tells how it ends. Unfortunately that conflicts with fiction-writing, where you generally try to avoid the reader finding out what happens in advance.

 

[Chater1703]

I think you would be better served by not giving the summary of each update at the start. If you really want to tell us the end of the story up front, how about putting it in one of those spoiler text boxes?

I can see that the newspaper-report format is fairly standard on this forum and a newspaper headline summarizes the story and tells how it ends. Unfortunately that conflicts with fiction-writing, where you generally try to avoid the reader finding out what happens in advance.

I see your point, but I feel that this is more of a report of the matches and series I play than an actual story, if you get what I mean. So the way I write about the matches I play is as if its a journalist reporting on a days play or a sessions play, but thats the way I write, haha.

 

[Aditya]

That was a thrilling match. England team has lots to improve on.

Keep it up, Chater.

 

[Roofrom50]

Just like the real Ashes series, Anderson held up this England side. Again he took 4 wickets. Another good bowling display from Swann as well.

Good update mate, loving the work. It;s sensational

 

[Chater1703]

Ashes Tour - ENG vs Aus A - Teams Announced

Squads announced for Australia A match