Aditya
ICC Board Member
Not good that hawk eye. The release looks like Khali bowled it, while it doesn't look realistic at all. You have got better results in your previous attempts. Another hurried thing, and basically the thing that puts me off this story now. Instead of improving, it is going downhill. Past few updates haven't been any good too. It seems to me that you're doing this for the sake of it or something, just doesn't feel you're involved in this.
Never ever want to discourage you but, it surely has gone well below its standards.
I know that the hawk eye is no where near perfect. I have never written this story for the sake of it, I just write this story for fun. I have mentioned in the past as well that I know that this story is going downhill and as a writer I'm not liking this. I can use the in game hawk eye but it isn't good so I thought I'll have a go at the hawk eye myself. I haven't made a hawk eye for months and that's why the hawk eye in the last update isn't the best. I don't want to give any excuse the truth is that this story hasn't been the best but I'll try and improve the quality of this story and hopefully it will work. Thanks a lot for saying what you feel, if you are not liking the efforts I'm putting into this story then you are free to let me know so and I'll try and improve the story.