Story Sam Spurway's Road to Glory - Two Runs To Win - Has Spurway Won Himself A Beer?

[freddiw]

awesome work and well written dom

 

[Highlander999]

Very nice start mate, just one comment. Maybe split the text into a few more paragraphs as it is a bit hard to read.

Apart from that, excellent work

 

[domiw]

thx for comments guys, i dont think ill be able to do an update today, happy new years everyone

 

[gamerkid22]

Nice work with the updates and nice to read as well . KUTGW

 

[gutterman]

great update unlucky about wes

 

[Karachi Xpress]

Good update and Happy New Year.

 

[surendar]

Listen to that song while you read this.

For the first time in stories I am coming across a song while reading. Even with simple ICC game, the way you take this story is fantastic. You can also see Roo's ICC story(but had to traverse few pages in story forums since it was long time before) which was also of top class to get some more ideas.

 

[Ollie_H]

Cant wait for another update mate, Looking Good

 

[domiw]

ty v. much for comments guys, as i am going to the first 2 days of aus vs ind i willl prob not be abkle to do updates im the coming couple of days

 

[domiw]

i am going to be completely changing the first post, as it was rushed and i do not think that it goes with the story. it will be mostly info on what technology is used, the build up and so on

 

[gutterman]

Can't wait for the next update

 

[domiw]

Can't wait for the next update

first post is edited
soon will edit the second

be sure to check the first post!

 

[Highlander999]

That first post looks much better. Well done

 

[gutterman]

the re-done first post looks much better

 

[Ollie_H]

I agree the First Post looks very nice