That's one of your best wallpapers shravi and you have shown very much improvement from the previous one's..(not that they're bad though
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The lighting is so good that in the kind of seeing that in the first view, people may want more lighting of the wallpaper..And, Text is good as well, not messy, not tassie..
..probably you could have tried overlay on it, but Maybe, it suits better None the less now..
One thing, the blur - line textures you've used should have been set to colour dodge, to give more blending and satisfaction to the textures and lighting placing..
The bottom running text is good, but be clever..
, set it to overlay and try to decrease the fill of the scan lines, so that the text blends in to the BG and gives' such a look that you can notice "afridi" text in the BG being techno and stylish, and smoothly blending in the BG..and giving great lights..and colours..
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Also, your only point that downs you has been the render, and the un-familiar blends it gives and takes the charm out of the whole Wallpaper..
In order to modify that point
, just go to>Layer>Matting>Remove White Matte
..Hope that helps you..
Cheers mate, you're improving vastly, I'm satisfied with the amount of skill and ability you possess, and people may not dis-agree with it.
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