WWE Revamped [EWR]

[treva]

Oh and just to let you know RAW and Smackdown have swapped TV channels

Just so you know about the ratings and what maximum they can get!

 

[Jaztheman]

not bad show i got a bit to live u pto considering my first ever show

 

[w3lshrugby]

Nicely laid out story, even though I know sod all about WWE

 

[Jaztheman]

TL: Welcome to tonights show, and god.....it's big!

MF: Yes and your commentators on New smackdown are, me Mick Foley and...

TL: Theodor Long. Wait we have James Edmonds the New GM of Smackdown coming out now.

MF: He has a contract in his hand?

JE: Earlier Tonight i went to the World Heavyweight champion of the world Baaatista!*Crowd Cheers* and we discussed and he said he dosn't want to be a paperweight champion.*Batista's music hits*

Batista: Well GM i am no paperweight and i will defend my title anywheree anytime.

JE: Fine. Prove it and sign this contract saying the winner of todays main event 10 man battle Royal.

Batista: You got a deal * Signs Paper*

TL: Oh my god i cant beleive it:O

MF: Are these two crazy, a ten man battle royal?

TL: Well it's the main even and i cannot wait for it

Segment rating 72%

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MF: Well here is his first match, made by the GM. A Special referee

TL: It should be a cracker of a match, obby Lashley against Umaga

Umaga vs Bobby Lashley - Special Referee - Armando Alejandro Estrada
The Match: Lashley takes a headbutt from Umaga. Lashley ducks a wild right hand. Trying to channel the spirit of Misawa, Bobby Lashley ends up chanelling Lex Luger instead and nails a running forearm to the face, minus the steel plate, of course. Lashley whips Umaga into the turnbuckles...and the ref is crushed! Bobby Lashley scores with a big spinebuster. Cover, but there's no one to count for Bobby Lashley! Umaga is able to duck a clothesline attempt and connect with a counter clothesline. Bobby Lashley charges into the corner, but EATS BOOT and staggers backward. Nice piledriver on Lashley. Hooks the leg for a two count. Brutal sit out powerbomb on Lashley! Hooks the leg! ONE...TWO...NO! Lashley counters an arm wringer with an elbow to the side of the head. Spinebuster by Bobby Lashley. Hooks the leg! ONE...TWO...NO! Umaga reverses a hip toss. Bobby Lashley is in control.
Finish:Armando Alejandro Estrada comes up behind...low blow! Lashley collapses to the floor. Umaga takes the advantage. Bobby Lashley can barely stand. Here it comes - Samoan Spike. 1....2...3, it's finished.
Winner: Umaga
Aftermath: The fight has started up again! Umaga attacks Lashley, and they brawl all around ringside, then into the crowd! They eventually disappear backstage, still fighting

MF: An alright match, spoiled by the cheating Umaga and Arman...

TL: Don't even try and say the cheaters name

MF: Keep your hai.... just shut up

Segment Rating 67%

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TL: Well is there someone backstage in the GM's Office?

MF: Yes it is, it's....

JTG: Well this Samsung 52 inch T.V would look nice in our house. What ya think Shad

Shad: I like this picture aswell, Mr.Mcmahon getting his ass wooped by DX

JTG: We are cryme Tyme and we rule* High five* Hey is someone coming in?

JE: Open you stupid door!!

Shad: Quickly in the shower....

TL: Haha. Our new GM has had his first taste of Smackdown. Haha

MF: I don't think he is going to be very happy about that* Gets Mr Socko out for fun*

Segment Rating 63%

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TL: Well up next are two great superstars!

MF: Yeh T-Lo, two young superstars rising through the ranks.

The Boogeyman vs Ken Kennedy - Singles
The Match: Kennedy receives some punishment by The Boogeyman but with that horrid offense, we're the only ones truly being punished. Kennedy gets splashed in the corner. There's a two count on the pin. Ken Kennedy reverses a hip toss. Bodyslam by Kennedy. Covers for a quick two count. Full nelson slam on Boogeyman. Covers for a quick two count. The Boogeyman fights out of a grapple. Weak bodyslam by Boogeyman. Pinfall attempt: ONE...TWO...NO! I would have bought that as the finish! Kennedy blocks the suplex attempt and is able to hit the suplex instead! The Boogeyman misses a clothesline...and takes out the referee accidentally! Death valley driver (not to be confused with the DVD 500) by Ken Kennedy connects and The Boogeyman is down! Pinfall attempt, but the ref is out and can't count to three! Spear by Ken Kennedy. Cover, ONE...TWO...NO!
Finish: I honestly thought that match was going to end right then and there. Ken Kennedy misses a clothesline. Ken Kennedy can barely stand. Goodnight!!! That shook the ring. 1....2....3!!
Winner: The Boogeyman
AfterMath: Kennedy grabs the referee, then nails him with a right hand! Dozens of people hit the ring to stop any further incident.

TL: That was a okay match, a bit boring but the boggeyman, amusing

MF:*Just cam back from helping officials with Mr.Kennedy* That son of a ****

TL: Time for a Comercial Break...

Segment Rating 65%

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MF: Our Next match is a great hopeful match. Whoever wins the match gets a shot at the cruiserweight title next week!

TL: But if the champ wins then it is the person who did not get pinned, Confused?

Gregory Helms vs Super Crazy vs Sabu - Triple Threat - No.1 contenders match
The Match: Standing leg lariat by Gregory Helms on Sabu. Gregory Helms connects with a back heel kick on Crazy and gets back up quickly. Sabu fights out of a grapple. Sabu hits a dropkick on Gregory Helms and gets right back up. SUPER frankensteiner on Sabu, who hit hard and is loopy as a result. Hooks the leg! ONE...TWO...NO! Gregory Helms hits a rolling kick on Crazy. Konnan has ruined any chance for me ever enjoying this maneuver again with his shitty execution of it. Super Crazy powers out of a Gregory Helms headlock. Sabu \ Crazy whip Helms into the ropes and hit a double backdrop. Tiger suplex on Helms. No Misawa references from me, I swear. Oh, Bloody Hell! Sabu walks into a high dropkick from Super Crazy, almost losing several teeth in the process.
Finish: Sabu flips out of a Super Crazy bodyslam attempt. Helms takes a flying neckbreaker from Sabu. Sabu floors Gregory Helms...and climbs the turnbuckles. Triple Jump Moonsault!!! 1....2....3!! It's all over.
Winner - Sabu - New No1 Contender
Aftermath: Sabu remains in the ring, celebrating his victory

MF: The best match so far, By far!!

TL: What a match and Finale, but i made these matches every week :

MF: Now to talk about facts

Segment rating 72%

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TL: Now we go backstage to where Eric Bischoff is interviewing someone special.

EB: For the second time tonight someone will be talking again. Batista!

Batista: Hey Eric i was just polishing and getting ready for my match next week. The animal will be released.

EB: Well lol That match is up soon and i geuss you will be watching?

Batista: Obvoisly i want to know who i am facing next week.

EB: Well who wouldn't you like to face next week then?

Batista: John...Cena!* Walks off*

MF: Well you heard it here first is Batista afraid of the chain gang leader?

Segment Rating 74%

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TL: Now for the first bit of Gold to be put on the line.

MF: Yes and i thank James Edmonds for this tag team match. Up next

London and Kendrick vs World's Greatest Tag Team - WWE Tag Team titles
The Match: Spin kick by Brian Kendrick to the face sends the opponent FLYING across the ring. SUPER frankensteiner on Haas, who hit hard and is loopy as a result. Hooks the leg for a two count. Tag between Brian Kendrick and Paul London. London and Kendrick hook up Haas, then hit a double suplex. Second rope flying axe handle, Haas goes down. One day, London might even consider coming off the top with that. You know...for more impact and stuff. There's a two count on the pin. Paul London kicks the leg, knocks Haas down, and goes to work on it. Haas blocks a kick from Paul London. Charlie Haas plants London with an EXPLODAH~! suplex. Haas tags out to Shelton Benjamin. Hard back suplex on London. Come to think of it, that move had WAY too much power in No Mercy for N64. Gutwrench into a powerbomb, aka the Doctor Bomb and London hits hard. London reverses a waistlock. Tag between Paul London and Brian Kendrick. Super kick by Brian Kendrick. Diamond Dust from Brian Kendrick and Shelton is out! Pinfall attempt: ONE...TWO...NO! Kendrick hits a HARD spinning kick to the jaw.
Finish: Brian Kendrick misses a clothesline. SUPER frankensteiner on Kendrick, who hit hard and is loopy as a result. Kendrick grabs Shelton Benjamin for Paul London, who swings...but Shelton ducks, and ends up nailingKendrickinstead! Brian Kendrick is in trouble. Here it comes - T-Bone Suplex. 1....2...3, it's finished.
Winners - The worlds Greatest Tag Team Shelton Benjamin and Charlie Haas
Aftermath: London and Kendrick remain in the ring. They are arguing about that defeat. Paul London walks off without saying anything, much to the disgust of Kendrick.

TL: Best match of the night and we have new Champs.

MF: Oh my what a match. Even the Hart foundation would be proud of that

Segment Value 80%

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TL: Well here it is, this is the maiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin event

MF: And it is the promised 10 man battle Royal and i imagaine Batista is watching in the dressing room.

10 Man Battle Royal - No1 Contenders match for the World Heavyweight Championship
The Match: STIFF~! chop lights up Cena who covers up to try and stop the agonizing PAIN! Orton went for the elimination, but John Cena held on to the ropes at the last possible second! Spinning back kick from Matt Hardy. Kane got eliminated by M.Hardy. (Elimination # 1) Carlito is a glutton for punishment and just continues to take it during this match. Finlay scores with a standing spinebuster. Jeff Hardy strikes Mercury. J.Hardy threw Joey Mercury all the way over the top rope to the floor. No question about that one. (Elimination # 2) M.Hardy hits a HARD spinning kick to the jaw. M.Hardy threw Johnny Nitro all the way over the top rope to the floor. No question about that one. (Elimination # 3) Cena is a glutton for punishment and just continues to take it during this match. Carlito went for the elimination, but John Cena held on to the ropes at the last possible second! Orton slams Jeff Hardy. Orton threw Jeff Hardy over the top rope, but Jeff Hardy skinned the cat to save himself! Carlito takes a flying neckbreaker from Matt Hardy. Carlito got bundled out by M.Hardy. (Elimination # 4) Finlay slams John Cena down and motions to the crowd. Finlay threw John Cena over the top rope, but John Cena skinned the cat to save himself! STIFF~! chop lights up Eugene who covers up to try and stop the agonizing PAIN! Cena slams Eugene down and motions to the crowd. Orton slams Finlay down and motions to the crowd. Orton threw Finlay all the way over the top rope to the floor. No question about that one. (Elimination # 5) Orton is a glutton for punishment and just continues to take it during this match. Brutal sit out powerbomb on Orton! Orton hits a right hand. Jeff Hardy was eliminated by Orton. (Elimination # 6) STIFF high kick on Eugene by Matt Hardy. Springboard dropkick from Matt Hardy. Nicely done. Fallaway slam by Randy Orton puts down Eugene. Eugene was eliminated by Orton. (Elimination # 7) Spinning back kick from Matt Hardy. THERE IT IS! A legdrop to the BACK OF THE HEAD! I swear, that makes any match just a little bit better. I don't mind telling you that every time I see it, that's for sure. Orton takes a flying neckbreaker from Matt Hardy. Randy Orton was eliminated by M.Hardy. 9Elimination # 8)
Finish: M.Hardy crushes Cena with a huge legdrop. Tiger suplex on Cena. No Misawa references from me, I swear. Oh, dammit. Matt Hardy gets taken down out of nowhere! Matt Hardy got eliminated by Cena.
Winner - John Cena - The new No1 Contender for the World Heavyweight Championship
Aftermath: John Cena remains in the ring, Celebrating his big chance on smackdown!

TL: That was a tired match that went on for a while but was an awsome match!

MF: Oh yes this must be one of the most important match of the year for Cena.

TL: Yes he has a title shot next week! But i think Hardy Deserved it

MF: Matt was absolutely top notch and i bet he will/should be rewarded by the GM

Segment Rating 72%

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TL: Well we can hear some people talking from backstage on our camera's(with sound)

MF: Let's check it out....

Mercury: Nitro, Melina we need to join up again and reform MNM. We got knocked out in the royal straight after eachother.

Nitro: Well i don't mind because there are some cocky tag teams aroung at the minute

Melina: Seeing im your manager i say.....YES!!! MNM are back. Lets regain our titles.* They walk off discussing something*

TL: Wow tonight has been special, MNM are back?!

MF: You better believe it teddy. And they are going for gold!

Segment Rating 68%

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TL: Well thats your first taste of the new Smackdown and i think i should still be GM!

MF: Get with it old man. See ya next time on smackdown!

Overall Show Rating - 70%
TV Rating - 6.92
Attendance - 9011 People
Ticket Sales - $360,440

 

[GrayNicolls]

Nice show. Too many special matches, though. Angles weren't so good either. Angles are the main parts where you get ratings! Use them wisely! What network are you 2 on, anyway?

 

[treva]

RAW = CW Network
SMackdown = USA Network
so Smackdown should get better ratings!

good show although I think like Gn said the angles weren't brilliant!
Still nice show

 

[plympilgrim]

great show, just realised that the word "glutton" and Stiff was used alot in the last match. Matt HArdy was on a role

 

[Jaztheman]

thanks for all the comments and i can't wait for Treva's next udate

 

[The Spin]

Good, and I agree with what everyone else has said, but also don't use smilies because a com guy would never say a smilie

 

[Jaztheman]

lol point taken spin, thanks for all the advice guys as that was my first ever time on ewr

 

[treva]

JL: Welcome to another RAW show here tonight and we hope it'll be a good un'

JC: Yes Jerry hoping the new GM can improve on what I would call rubbish last week show.

JL: Well speek of the devil here he is now! Lets see what he ahs to say

Jack Teague: Tonight I have some big news for you. I am going to ask, who is your favourite wrestlers of modern times. Now I hear some of you shouting The Rock. Well guess what...He's here!!!!

*The Rock's music comes on and out steps The Rock*

The Rock: Caaaaaaaan yooooou smeeeeellllll whaaaaat THE ROCK is cooking?

Jack Teague: We also have Alex Shane who will debut tonight here on RAW!

JL: Can you believe it! The Rock is back.

JC: I'm amazed. Also I would like to see this Alex Shane in action tonight.

Segment Rating 84%
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JL: Well now we have Jamie Noble vs The Sandman.

JC: This should be interesting. Lets go ringside....

The Sandman vs Jamie Noble - Singles
The Match: Running knee lift from The Sandman. Full nelson slam on Noble. Hooks the leg for a two count. Jamie Noble avoids a The Sandman avalanche by getting out of the damn way! Jamie Noble strikes Sandman. Sandman takes a flying neckbreaker from Jamie Noble. There's a two count on the pin. Tiger suplex on Sandman. No Misawa references from me, I swear. Oh, Bloody Hell! Pin, but Sandman is out just before the three count. Spin kick by Jamie Noble to the face sends the opponent FLYING across the ring. Sandman blocks a punch. Sandman hits a piledriver on Jamie Noble. That used to end matches, you know. Hooks the leg for a two count. Powerbomb on Noble. Pin, but Noble is out just before the three count. Running knee lift from The Sandman. Noble gets slammed down hard and winces in pain. Noble ducks a wild right hand. Jamie Noble hits a rolling kick on Sandman. Konnan has ruined any chance for me ever enjoying this maneuver again with his shitty execution of it.
Finish: Tiger suplex on Sandman. No Misawa references from me, I swear. Oh, dammit. Jamie Noble has The Sandman down on the canvas. Here it comes...Modified Dragon Sleeper! The Sandman taps!
Winner - Jamie Noble by submission
Aftermath: The Sandman gives a murderous look toward Jamie Noble...and attacks! Noble gets dropped to the canvas, then battered with a barrage of rights and lefts. Sandman picks him up...and launches him over the top rope to the outside. A small measure of revenge has been taken.

JL: Not a bad match there but what a sore looser The Sandman is.

JC: Yes a good match but spoiled by the attack at the end there.

Segment Rating 72%
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JL: Well now we have the young man Alex Shane debuting against Mike Knox.

JC: Will be interested to see what he can do...

Alex Shane vs Mike Knox - Singles
The Match: Knox is a glutton for punishment and just continues to take it during this match. Shane hits a right hand. Fallaway slam by Alex Shane puts down Mike Knox. Alex Shane with a spinning neckbreaker on Knox. Mike Knox comes up with a right hand out of nowhere. Alex Shane takes a right hand to the temple from Knox. Mike Knox DDTs Shane, but it just looked terrible. There's a two count on the pin. Knox walks into a drop toe hold. Massive backbreaker on Knox and I get happy flashbacks to Bret Hart's Five Moves of DOOM. Hooks the leg for a two count. DEATH VALLEY DRIVAH~! by Alex Shane just KILLS Mike Knox! Pinfall attempt: ONE...TWO...NO! Shane drops an elbow...but Mike Knox moves out of the way.
Finish: Uninspired brawling from Mike Knox. Knox walks into a drop toe hold. Bodyslam by Shane. Mike Knox is in trouble. Here it comes - One Night Stand. 1....2...3, it's finished.
Winner - Alex Shane
Aftermath: Alex Shane climbs each turnbuckle in turn, working the crowd as he celebrates his victory.

JL: A great match first up from the young lad.

JC: Yes he definatley showed some potential there.

Segment Rating 49%
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JL: Well The Rock and Alex Shane are backstage. The Rock has offered his hand to Alex Shane and they shake. It looks like we could have a new tag team on our hands here.

JC: That's great news! Hope they can kick some heel ass.

Segment Rating 73%
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JL: Now after last weeks cheating from Sharmell and King Booker we have a tag match between Mickie James and Rey Mysterio v Queen Sharmell and King Booker.

[

B]Mickie James and Rey Mysterio vs Queen Sharmell and King Booker - Tag
The Match:[/B] BIG clothesline on Mickie. Mickie powers out of a headlock. Mickie hits a spinning back kick. All those spinning kicks look alike, don't they. Tag to Rey Mysterio. Implant DDT by Rey Mysterio! I will always and forever mark out for that move. Rey Mysterio hits a rolling kick on Booker. Konnan has ruined any chance for me ever enjoying this maneuver again with his shitty execution of it. Mysterio drops an elbow...but King Booker moves out of the way. King Booker with a spinning neckbreaker on Mysterio. Booker tags out to Queen Sharmell. Sharmell hits a quick kick on Mysterio, only for Mysterio to pop back up and eat another one. Kick to the gut from Sharmell, who sadly, was even able to botch THAT. Sharmell goes for a splash but Mysterio puts the knees up. Second rope flying axe handle, Sharmell goes down. One day, Mysterio might even consider coming off the top with that. You know...for more impact and stuff. Tag to Mickie James. Mickie James with an enziguri! HBK isn't moving...uh oh. Oh, sorry, I had a flashback to the last time I got fooled. Hooks the leg! ONE...TWO...NO!
Finish:Mickie hits a soaring kick on Sharmell. Sharmell holds Mickie James in place. King Booker charges...but Mickie ducks, andBookerends up flooringSharmell! Mickie James drives Queen Sharmell into the corner. Tornado DDT!!! 1....2....3!!
Winner - Mickie James & Rey Mysterio
Aftermath: It's all over. Booker and Sharmell remain in the ring. They are arguing about that defeat. King Booker walks off without saying anything, much to the disgust of Sharmell.

JL: Wow Booker not happy about that loss and left Sharmell in the ring.

JC: What a sore loser. I'm glad Rey and Mickie won!

Segment Rating 72%
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JL: Well look who it is ringside. It's American Actor Bruce Willis. Vito is talking to him. What a moment this must be for Vito to meet such a great actor like Bruce!

Segment Rting 59%
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JL: The Bloods II are in the ring. DX have come out onto the sound stage, and issue a challenge for a match tonight. Blue Bloods II accept, and the two teams trade insults for a while before leaving. This should be a facenating match.

JC: Yes jerry should be a great one for the RAW Tag Team Championship as well.

Segment Rating 73%
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JL: Now this match looks like it could be great.

JC: Yes The Undertaker vs Edge. Lets go to the ring to watch this one.

The Undertaker vs Edge - Single
The Match: Undertaker scoops and slams Edge. What's the difference between a scoop slam and a body slam anyway? Undertaker hits a right hand. Flying shoulder tackle by Undertaker sends Edge CRASHING to the mat. Undertaker slams Edge down and motions to the crowd. Edge kicks The Undertaker in the gut to reverse the momentum. Bodyslam by Edge. Full nelson slam on Undertaker. Covers for a quick two count. Undertaker backdrops Edge out of a piledriver attempt. That took a lot out of The Undertaker. Nice piledriver on Edge. There's a two count on the pin. Massive lariat! Stan Hansen would approve. Pinfall attempt: ONE...TWO...NO! I would have bought that as the finish! Edge once again takes the advantage after blocking a few punches and connecting with some forearms. Undertaker gets slammed down hard and winces in pain.
Finish: Undertaker counters a backdrop attempt with a kick to the face and hit a clothesline! Fallaway slam by The Undertaker puts down Edge. Edge can barely stand. Here it comes - Tombstone Piledriver. 1....2...3, it's finished.
Winner - The Undertaker
Aftermath: Edge leaves the ring and heads off down the aisle. Edge obviously didn't want any more of a beating tonight.

JL: What a match! Undertaker truely hammered Edge.

JC: Wooooooo, go Undertaker. Simply brilliant.

Segment Rating 85%
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DX vs Blue Bloods II - Tables Tag Match - RAW Tag Team Championship
The Match: Brutal sit out powerbomb on Taylor! Big dropkick by Shawn Michaels, who got a ton of air on the move. DX whip Regal into the corner. Shawn Michaels whips Triple H in for a hard clothesline to follow-up.
Finish: HBK sets up the table, then grabs Dave Taylor and hits a suplex through the table for the win.
Winners - DX - New RAW Tag Team Champions
Aftermath: DX nod at each other...and they attack Blue Bloods II! The element of surprise works in their favour, and they have soon left Blue Bloods II down and out on the canvas.

JL: A brilliant match there between DX and Blue Bloods II.

JC: That's it for this week's show but a definate improvement on last week's RAW. Goodnight.

Segment Rating 81%
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Overall Rating - 72%
TV Rating - 6.01
Attendance - 9007
Ticket Sales - $360280

 

[GrayNicolls]

Hey nice work. No offence, but this is looking a bit of a rip off of mine and Chez's story, what with The Rock and everything...

 

[The Spin]

Yes, Im going to have to do you for plagiarism if you cross any more lines.

 

[treva]

Well we may aswell stop then if your going to be like that!
The Rock was my favourite wrestler and that's why I brought him in.
Jaz if you agree then we may aswell stop this...

 

[Jaztheman]

i say carry on all ewr stories cant be totally different and he is treva's favourite wresstler and if isnt aloud to do that then i quit PC!!