Story Australia Journey Chappell-Hadlee Trophy - New Zealand v Australia

[MaD]

This is like the 10th time you're being told, if you don't know what to write yourself, just don't bother

 

[Aussie Team]

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2nd ODI - New Zealand v Australia at Eden Park, Auckland ​

Styirs operative player for the Kiwis, Played a extreme innings when his team request's him to stay at the end of the innings, Broom Ensue 35* was the best score in his career and made up 50 run stand for the 6th wicket. Styirs wondrous innings of 50 made up a important contribution for the team. He persist playing some short's toward's midwicket and Broom Strenuous as much as he can as He move's to 40's. Hopes have bowled couple of overs and have deserved some strokes and E'rate is about 9 Per-over.

Broom and Styirs have a few words to proceed. And it seem to be Watson to bowl. As for Broom, Aiming to make a maiden Odi Half-century. Ponting trying to get a depress wicket. As the end overs coming in Styirs follow's down to mid on who takes a simple caught. Even doe a great innings of 70 come's at the end, It was not the first time Styris play's but he haven't hit hard to clear the boundary, and the caught was taken easily at the ropes. As for the loss of wicket, Captain Vettori come's in to replace Styris. As far as Broom, 3 runs short of Half-century. As he will be having the strike in the next over. Watson was stupid, in which gave 5 wickets and a no ball. Broom cut's it and he get's a maiden Odi Half-century. The crowd are dialled with his performance's.

Vettori falls down at the power play overs, Caught behind and clearly it was a edge, when we will see at hot spot the result show's like this. New Zealand - 211/6 in 40 overs. Neil Broom - 53 (43 balls), James Franklin - 1 (2 balls)

 

[Chewie]

I couldn't understand a single bit of that.

 

[MaD]

They guys name is STYRIS
Great improvement in writing KIU

 

[Aussie Team]

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2nd ODI - New Zealand v Australia at Eden Park, Auckland ​

Broom is in great form as his maiden fifty brought up in just 43 deliveries. He Embark on a new career. We some lazy running from Franklin, He'd lost his wicket by lazy running. And Franklin was out for a 15 runs. Broom continued to play some aggressive strokes and he move's to 70 with 7 overs to go and the power play was going about 7 per over in 3 overs as 2 left. Broom continually found himself with belted two sixes and three fours while McCullum scampered 29 from 12 deliveries with three six's and one boundary. Bromm's mind-blowing 74 from 53 deliveries made the reach of 268/7 and 74 came in the power play overs two wickets loss. McCullum and Broom both sent for 5 sixes in what should have been a Fantastic performance from this youngsters coming a 50 runs stand off 21 balls. With some of his shorts Broom moving to 90's and wanted to get his maiden ton. And with McCullum the All ROunder is in mind-blowing form as he have moved to 45 off just 18 balls and his career best, This youngster are proving to the selector that they are the key part in this New Zealand Squad. But Broom Follows back for a great innings, Was caught out at point and a wondrous innings of 95 come's to an end. And With that. the Australians were confident of a whitewash, but the match swung again with the arrival of Southee. The target was not so much chipped away as chopped at and Broom, the hero from Auckland, made a great innings and display's of the final over went for 9 runs And the target to chase is the big one, 310.

 

[Varun]

Average Update. You can improve it more.

 

[Bounce]

Some more writings can make it better Aussie Team.

 

[just_cricket]

the Australians were confident of a whitewash

Well I know Aussies are confident, but that's taking it a bit far! I mean they lost the first game, surely a whitewash is out of the question?

But at least, as far as I can see, it's your own work. The game itself is interesting anyway! Nice to see Neil Broom amongst the runs.
Kiu!

 

[MaD]

Good improvement, at least you're using your own words
Watch where you put your capital letters
Yes, your grammar needs some seriously hectic improvement, but don't worry you'll get there

 

[Aussie Team]

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2nd ODI - New Zealand v Australia at Eden Park, Auckland ​

Welcome back to 2nd Odi and Australia request 311 to win this match in 50 overs and now Its time for live action, Lets join to the commentary box, Richie Benaud with Ian Healy. Oh! What a game we are having, A magnificent day of high scoring inspired by Neil Broom ended the innings with a huge margin. The players are ready, so lets join the live action.



Australia were up to Southee and trouble start as Hopes edges towards the keeper and problems for Australia, Lost they first wicket for 7 as Hopes don't trouble the scores, he goes for duck. Ponting have promoted Clarke up to the order, as Ponting having some back problems. And here is the hot spot, when he was trying to play over cover, he find's an edge. Watson willing to clear the 30 ward circle, but he was caught out at cover and a dolly for the fielder. And now Australia are in deep deep trouble 2 down. Ponting again promoted White at number 3. Boundaries rained like the weather in the lead-up once White reached to double fighters, But he haven't contact the ball to the fences, And White departure was key for NZ. With the result 53/3, Ponting arrivals to the middle as Buzz around the crowd.

As Ponting is in Great form the NZ are feeling the hot, 5 conservative fours made a good contribution and 18 runs off Vettori. Change in the commentary box, Mark Taylor with Simon Doull in the next half of the innings. Oh! Problems for Australia, 3 down for 89 and we have a special gust Stephen Fleming with us in the commentary box. Stephen Fleming - Good start for NZ 3 wickets and If they get the wicket of Ponting, then they have some chances of winning this game. Oh! That true, Ponting is gone, A well seat batsmen follow back as he interesting innings comes to an end (37 off 21 balls). With some outstanding bowling from Vettori the wicket keeper fails again to score runs (Manou) departs for a duck and Australia deep deep Trouble 5 down for 106. Boundaries rained like the weather in the lead-up once Michael Clarke reached his half-century, lifting Australia from the trouble of 21 for 2. What followed were three magnificent examples of power hitting. Clarke played patiently at first, waiting 67 balls to bring up his fifty, and then exploded some of the shorts (Boundary).

 

[Aditya]

The hot spot is very messed up. It's good to see you trying new things but I rather like the things to be as realistic as they could be.

Watson willing to clear the 30 ward circle

It is 30 yard circle not 30 ward circle

Boundaries rained like the weather in the lead-up once White reached to double fighters

Not double fighters it is double figures

As Ponting is in Great form the NZ are feeling the hot, 5 conservative fours made a good contribution and 18 runs off Vettori.

5 fours = 20. So how can the over still produce 18 runs when a batsman has smashed 5 fours in the over? Also, it should be 5 consecutive fours not 5 conservative fours.

A well seat batsmen follow back as he interesting innings comes to an end (37 off 21 balls).

Not a well seat batsman it should be a well settled batsman. As he interesting innings comes to an end in place of this it should be an interesting innings comes to an end. 37 off 21 balls? Ponting made 35 of 23 balls.

Boundaries rained like the weather in the lead-up once Michael Clarke reached his half-century

When Australia are in deep deep trouble I don't think any batsman can be attacking and that too a settled batsman, even 30 overs of the innings are not completed. The updates should be as realistic as it could be. Can you imagine any team in trouble and a well settled batsman smashing fours as soon as he reaches his fifty? We may see this but not in situation when tail enders are to follow after just a wicket. Also, Manou coming ahead in the batting order than Hussey?

At least now you are writing this story on your own. As I have mentioned earlier read the update at least twice from up to down to make sure that there are no mistakes in the update. I hope you will improve your writing and presentation.

 

[Aussie Team]

The hot spot is very messed up. It's good to see you trying new things but I rather like the things to be as realistic as they could be.



It is 30 yard circle not 30 ward circle



Not double fighters it is double figures



5 fours = 20. So how can the over still produce 18 runs when a batsman has smashed 5 fours in the over? Also, it should be 5 consecutive fours not 5 conservative fours.



Not a well seat batsman it should be a well settled batsman. As he interesting innings comes to an end in place of this it should be an interesting innings comes to an end. 37 off 21 balls? Ponting made 35 of 23 balls.

Manou coming ahead in the batting order than Hussey?

At least now you are writing this story on your own. As I have mentioned earlier read the update at least twice from up to down to make sure that there are no mistakes in the update. I hope you will improve your writing and presentation.

Well, Thanks for finding the mistakes mate, It like, I'm hurry to post the upgrade ASAP, that's why It is costing me some problems and Yeah Manou have promoted because Hussey is the key member they wanted to save he in the later in the innings.

 

[MaD]

Do not be in a hurry!
Take your time and go through the mistakes
Your mistakes are so silly, just take your time and go through the update before you post it

 

[just_cricket]

Also on the scorecard it should be D Bollinger...

Grammar aside, that's a better update. Just a tip for hot spot - instead of that weird effect you've got there you should make the image black and white, and then either:

a) Lower the brightness and contrast a bit

or

b) Make it a negative image

Keep experimenting though, this looks to be improving. I like it in that the Black Caps are doing pretty well anyway!

 

[Aussie Team]

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2nd ODI - New Zealand v Australia at Eden Park, Auckland ​

A stand of 82 between Hussey and Clarke, who posted there second consecutive fifty, set up the partnership after Ricky Ponting dragged Australia from the early trouble of 119 for 4. Hussey bring's up his half-century in short period of time (33 balls). He usually either found the boundary or cleared it in the in the middle overs. And After a beautiful knock of 52, Hussey walk's back to the dressing room as a superb peace of fielding (Vettroi) aim the stumps and the dangerous wicket for the New Zealand boys. The home side have finally broken the partnership which was looking dangerous. And all of sudden Australia 6 down and Clarke the key man steel find's some boundaries and move up to 80's.

A useful contribution from Johnson (24), Australia were just requested 75 off 81 balls RR Rate is about 5.77. Michael Clarke was playing patiently as he move to 90's and the change in the field as Vettori bring's up mid on, mid off and deep mid-wicket. All Of them were saving the single. The overdose of entertainment was led by Clarke with a brilliant, brutal 100 as the back to back centuries whimper of the first and second game was followed with a massive bang. And With the stand of 60, Aussies clearly wanted to win this game as 21 more need to win this second Odi match. Oh! After a beautiful innings of 101 (Clarke) Departs and now 21 to win from 23 balls and 3 wicket remaining. Johnson's fifty Helped Australia to win and ended up securing the victory with an incredible six balls to spare. 1-1