Great story, dude, but you have some major problems with the Pakistani line-up!
1. Kamran Akmal is definately not an opener; he needs to bat at the No.8 spot.
2. Shoaib Malik, however, is one of Pakistan's most reliable openers these days and thus should open with Salman Butt.
3. Younis Khan is our man at No.3. He's been wasted at the No.6 spot. He's been batting third for a while now and is doing great at that position.
4. Shahid Afridi should be at the No.6 spot. I noticed that you used him as an opener in the last match (and to be fair he did score 60 runs) but I'm glad to see that he's been moved down the order now: That is where he is the most destructive. If you juggle the order around as I have suggested above, then Afridi will fit nicley into the No.6 spot.
Other than that, it's all good. Inzi should definately bat at No.4, followed by MoYo. Good luck with the story! :happy