Story Who am i, trying to discover me and still trying chapter 4 posted

[FC Akash.]

CHAPTER - 1 (Down)




CHAPTER - 2



CHAPTER - 3


CHAPTER - 4


CHAPTER - 5​

WHO AM I, TRYING TO DISCOVER ME






This DIARY cover the life of a boy(me)
who live in chennai,tamilnadu,india
The story in this DIARY is the things which happened in my life
And do not mention a person who is dead or alive
if any of these have happened in any other's life is purely CO-INCIDENTIAL

CHAPTER-1




MY FIRST DAY ON CRICKET ACADEMY

THE FIRST DAY I JOINED CRICKET ACADEMY
EVERYTHING LOOKED SO STRANGELY TO ME
AWESOME PLAYERS
EVEN GUYS UNDER 8 YEARS
BOWLING AND BATTING FANTASTICALLY
PLAYERS GETTING READY FOR DISTRICT MATCHES
AND ETC





NOW THEY ADDED ME TO BEGINNER GROUP







the day i joined they played a cricket ball match





that is the first time i am playing in cricket ball





coach told me to bowl





i throwed the ball (at the time i dont know to bowl)




coach taught me again and again but i still throwed because of practice





the last ball of the over





i throwed the ball straight to batsman's pads





he stroked it





it has been edged



and gone a long way above







there was our team captain getting ready to catch the ball

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the ball came closer to him

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he missed it





but i cried
"HOWZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZAT"





without knowing he missed the catch





coach taken me back to this world





i realized

that he missed the catch(FACEPALM)





the next moment


my mind told me to scold him




i scolded him






"hey why the heck you missed the ball"





all the boys in our team looked strangely on me









then i apologized




to him







he said it's okay





WHAT MADE ME SCOLD HIM

anger of missing the first catch of the match

or

selfishness (missed the catch of my wicket)






I ASKED MYSELF AGAIN AND AGAIN





AND AT LAST WE LOST THE MATCH

 

[RPHKR]

Good to know there's another story here. I am suggesting a title change and the way you present.

 

[Jine]

Good to read it. nice beginning man.

 

[FC Akash.]

@RPHKR

why you are not continuing your story

 

[FC Akash.]

Chapter 2

CHAPTER 2

MOVING TO NEXT LEVEL


now it has been a month since i have joined cricket academy

i have proved my talent in batting


my coach sent me to next level




SENIOR level coach told me to bowl


i dont know how to BOWL (know the bowling action but cant bowl straightly)




i bowled WIDES again and again




so coach told me to bat






now i came near the crease




asked for guard



"sir leg stumps please"



sir told :"you are standing at the right place"


all bowlers were planning to how to take my wicket




i have played the first two balls correctly



third ball was bowled by an fast bowler(he bowls like demon)



he came fastly near the stumps in wind speed


bowled an fastest ball





i am thinking how to play the ball



afraid of a fast ball(at the time i am afraid not now)




his fast ball made my heart beat fastly

tuck tuck
tuck tuck
tuck tuck


it came near me i tried to play it



in a great force


my mind said come on hit the ball

i went closer to the ball

closer

closer

closer



but ball hitted the stumps






stumps flew away and stopped by keeper



when i saw back middle stump is not there it was behind keeper




i scolded myself


hey idiot why the heck you missed the ball if you do again like this then coach will send you back to beginners

i said it to myself again and again


coach appreciated the bowler



and all the other balls i played shots




now last ball



bowler bowled an full toss


it came straight to my chest




i thought to play a hook


but i defended it without moving back foot





the ball got edged and hit my chest





i cant stand



because force made me fall




my legs slipped and i fell down on stump




by god's grace nothing happened to me




and now coach sent me back to beginners and told beginner's coach to explain to play a hook



i thought





but i am a good hook player





i am thinking


what made me losing my wickets two times



my tension to play well

or

fear on the fast ball

i thought about it the whole day



even till now i didn't get the answer


and till now thinking
WHO AM I?

and still TRYING TO DISCOVER ME


to be continued

 

[RPHKR]

Your writing is heavily inspired by my story and the title is re-used. I suggest a title change.
Well just don't leave more space between lines. Make it simple. You'll learn though.

 

[FC Akash.]

Your writing is heavily inspired by my story and the title is re-used. I suggest a title change.
Well just don't leave more space between lines. Make it simple. You'll learn though.

@RPHKR

i am sorry these really happened in my life

 

[RPHKR]

Haha alright. Just concentrate on your presentation. Put some pictures.

 

[AnonymousUser5256]

Good Start

 

[Jine]

Goody .

 

[FC Akash.]

story will be continued after two days

 

[FC Akash.]

continution

those two chapters happened three months ago
as nothing happened specially in my cricket life nor in my life
i will start the next chapter next week
because now i performed well especially playing fast balls and full toss balls
now my coach is sending me to next level
i will play at next level in saturday
so i will continue this diary next week

 

[FC Akash.]

My Diary Is Reopened And I Will Continue
Thanks @Parmesh killer For Encouraging To Continue This

 

[FC Akash.]

CHAPTER - 3



Getting Hard Training



As Senior Level Coach Sent Me Back To Beginnner
I Was Worried A Lot
So I Decided To Train Hard And Hard And To Get To Senior Level
Now I Cried When I Came Home
"Why The **** I Didn't Perform Well In Senior Group
I Am A ***** I Am A Great Loser:
And The Very Next Day I Went To Class
I Asked My Beginner Coach To Teach Me Bowling
He Pointed Out My Mistakes Within A Few Days I Learnt Proper Bowling

But I Hated To Bowl Pace My Concentration Turned On Spinning The Ball
I Just Wanted To Bowl Like The Master SHANE WARNE

I Told Myself I Should Take A Decision I Should Bowl Well And I Should Bowl A Great Spell
As My Coach Is Not A Good Bowler (Opening Batsman) He Told Me To Bowl Pace First
But I Hated Pace
So I Tried Legspin For The First Time In Nets
I Came Slowly To Crease
Slowwwwwwly
Rotated My Arms
Turned The Ball
What A Surprise
My Hands Gone Sideways Like Malinga I Felt That I Bowled Correctly
But There
My Fate Played Its Game
Ball Went Above The Net TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Wide
Same Happened Continuously For 10 - 11 Balls
My Coach Came Near Me
Asked Me "You Have Bowled Superbly These Days But Why Are You Performing Bad Today Whats The Problem With You Why Are You Bowling Like Malinga
Why Your Fingers Are Changing The Direction Of The Ball"
I Said "Sir I Want To Become A Leg Spinner I Hate Pace"
He Replied "Ok But First Bowl Pace Ok Try Those Later"
My Friends Started Making Fun Of Me
I Just Got Disturbed In My Mind
The Total Day I Bowled Badly
My Coach Scolded Me
I Just Came Home And Cried
At Last Surfed In Internet For Leg Spinning Videos
I Tried Again And Again But Failed
I Decided To Stop Bowling But My Heart And Mind Said No You Should Be An All - Rounder
I Just Got Confused And Cried Badly ​

 

[RPHKR]

Don't Post Like This, You Know What It Is Pretty Bad And Boring
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