Story The Dr. Pepper Story-Oh Dear...***Ending the story***

[Jaztheman]

Nice to see I'm still very much a legend and the leader of the geeks who can make mistakes, sometimes...

Good update there Mani, good cliffhanger at the end there to lead onto the next update. We want cricket for god sake! This might have to go in the other games section soon.

 

[Dr. Pepper]

Shut up geek!

 

[Dr. Pepper]

Chapter 17
Illegal Troubles
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BANG! The door slammed against the wall. You thought it was a gun shot lolz. You stupid people. You're dumber than Jizztheman on PC for christ's sake lol. Damn, these "moderators" don't let you say anything on PC...I mean TV...I mean, I dunno. Anyway I slammed the door open and broke it down.

"I didn't do it."

Well I didn't...Well I did but...Shut up! The door slammed down to the floor making a giant thud. It alerted whoever it was inside because I heard lots of footsteps. It was more like running, like a panther, chasing after it's prey. Unfortunately I was the prey. Seeing as we had no way out, we decided to walk cautiously forward.

We kept turning drastically after hearing the slightest sound. Sometimes there was no sound whatsoever. CREEEK. What was that!? We turned around, searching our surroundings to find where that sound came from. It was just Tom messing around with the floorboards.

"HEY! Who's there?"

Someone heard us. They were coming after us. What was going on? This was a freaky Cricket Ground dude. I mean seriously what the fish? What was next, a match fixing scandal involving Yorkshire Cricket Club?

Them two men who saw us caught up with us in a couple of seconds. It wasn't as if we were running though. They grabbed Tom and James by the collars and dragged them away. We swiftly followed.

The two men stopped suddenly and I banged into one of them. It was like banging into a brick wall. It hurt...a lot. Anyway they turned around and one of them pointed at the door and the other booted James and Tom in there. Me and Dave entered casually.

"What the f*** is going on?"

There was a man there. On a chair behind the wooden desk. He was facing the other way, like they do in movies. I took a look around his office. Everything was amazing. He had priceless artefacts covering the office, in every nook and cranny. How the hell was he so rich?

"The gig is up Martyn. We're going to the police!"

Gig? Martyn? Police? What the hell was James about this time? Jesus christ, just when one thing is over, another thing happens. And all of this is because of James. He deserves the punishment he gets the little prick.

"Calm down young man. I don't know what you're talking about. I don't even know your name."

The man turned his chair around and showed his face. His face! I'd seen it before. I know I've seen it before but where? Where? Martyn and this face at a Cricket Ground.

"My name is James. This is Mani, Dave, Treva and Tom. You know full well what I'm on about. The match fixing scandal!"

"Match fixing?!?! What the hell are you talking about?!"

"This is Martyn Moxon. The Yorkshire Cricket Coach. He's been leading a match-fixing scandal with his team."

To be continued...​

 

[Jaztheman]

Update got better as it went on, which is good and ended with a great climax. Who'd of thought that would of been the ending?! I wonder what's going to happen to James, Mani and everyone...

Great update though Mani, nice to see this still going.

 

[Dr. Pepper]

Cheers Jizz. But in all seriousness, thanks for the support mate, you've been a sweet follower of this story and that's a reason why it's lasted so long. Because people support it.

 

[Highlander999]

That update so sounded like me. Had a gun-shot noise: I've been shot. I gave Jaz the name Jiz. You stole my ideas about match-fixing. Oh yeah and the police *cough cough*

You just idolise me Mani. Just like treva and Jaz. Of course Jaz does dribble, but I am sure the doctors can help him!

 

[Kiko_97]

LOL WTF!!! I'm confused kinda. Great update as usual KIU

 

[Dr. Pepper]

That update so sounded like me. Had a gun-shot noise: I've been shot. I gave Jaz the name Jiz. You stole my ideas about match-fixing. Oh yeah and the police *cough cough*

You just idolise me Mani. Just like treva and Jaz. Of course Jaz does dribble, but I am sure the doctors can help him!

I actually had the idea written already and it was merely coincidental.

 

[Dr. Pepper]

Chapter 18
Decision Time​

Previously on The Dr. Pepper Story-Oh Dear...BANG! It was the door. What's going on? Who are you? Where are you taking us? We're in an extravagent office. The gig is up! We're going to the police! This is Martyn Moxon, he's been leading a match fixing scandal. And now, the show...

What...the...f***!?!? The coach of Yorkshire, Martyn Moxon. One of the most respected people in the Cricketing community. This guy was match fixing? What the hell? Seriously, what the hell?

"What the hell? Seriously what the hell?!"

"Perhaps the case is that you're misinformed James. We are only performing legal activities here. Of course, like everyone else, we have treaded past the line of the law. But who hasn't? Who hasn't downloaded a song for free? Who hasn't stolen a pence sweet? Who hasn't fixed a few matches? Oh sh**...I shouldn't have said the last one. OK we've been fixing matches. But who can blame us? We haven't won anything in years. Our supporters are leaving us. We have to get trophies."

"But you have so much money though, where has that come from?"

"Oh yeah. We've been match fixing. Losing games. Remember that Friends Provident Trophy Final against Essex. We need four runs from two overs. Did you really think we bottled it? We were paid to lose. We needed the money though. We had to do it then. We were going bankrupt. But then we got greedy, we got selfish. We carried on. We said one more game everytime but it eventually led to us being relegated to division two. But we've stopped now! We've stopped fixing matches now. We have the money, we have the resources, we're on the rise and we're going to bring us up to the top again."

"So...what makes you think we won't tell the police? What are you going to offer us to stop us from leaving?"

"Ah straight to the point, I like it. I can make it worth your while guys. How would you like to play for Yorkshire Cricket Club? Not just in the second XI. But in the starting XI, the first names on the sheet. We can say it's part of our tactic to bring up the youths. You can be classed as wonderkids. What more would you want?"

"I accept!"

"So do I!"

"Me too..or three...or four."

"I want a hundred grand a month and a Ferrari Enzo to sweeten the deal."

"Sure, OK. The rest of you just get a contract. Hah."

Wow! I couldn't believe it! A contract with Yorkshire, classed as the wonderkid of cricket, a Ferrari Enzo and a seven figure contract. If Jessica Alba came with all that, it would be all my dreams rolled up into one. Next week, Saturday morning at 7AM we had to go to cricket training for Yorkshire for the first time. Wow...

End of Season Two​

 

[Jaztheman]

Wahay! Cricket! Brilliant update there, Mani, best in a while I'd say. Finally we will see some cricket where i'm sure Yorkshire will be winning with you in the team... or not.

Good luck with Yorkshire, mate.

 

[Dr. Pepper]

You, Dave and Tom also have contracts with Yorkshire . I just have a Ferrari Enzo and hundred grand a month as well though. But yeah cheers, huzzah! Cricket is finally here. We've waited over six months!

 

[Kiko_97]

Yay!!!! I've been waiting ages for cricket. Tom's duck for mascot!!!!!! Where's Roary?

 

[Highlander999]

Yay, I can be northern!!!!

 

[Dr. Pepper]

Who the hell's roary?

 

[Kiko_97]

Our sponser Roary the Lion!!