Right its not going well!
Lost 5-1 in my first game against Arsenal and then 1-0 to hull in the second! I'm outraged after spending much money it certainly isnt turning out right! My team looks like this
---------------Hart
---Garrido-----Dunne-----Richards
----------Fernandes----Veloso
--Castillo----Aguero----Robinho
---------Frei-------Jo
I'll attempt to offer some little tips. First one. Bin the formation. It's farrrr too attacking, using 3 defenders in the Premier League, especially when those 3 defenders include Garrido and Dunne is madness. I'd go for 4 at the back, buy a new right back (I'd buy Rafinha, I bought him for City), then buy a new Centre Back, I went for Gonzalo Rodriguez from Villarreal and he's done a splendid job for me.
No problems with the 2 centre midfielders, Miguel Veloso's a top talent, has phenomenal stats for a defensive midfielder.
Not sure who Castillo is, but I'd guess he's not as good as Wright Phillips as I've never heard of him. Personally I'd use Elano in that position, or buy Allessandro Rosina. Rosina only cost me ?15million or so, but he's dynamite. Chips in with goals, good on both feet and really puts in some good crosses.
Then I see a fairly big problem with the strikers. There's no way that Jo and Frei will score anywhere near enough goals to challenge for the title. You'll be constantly relying on the midfielders to chip in with goals, which just don't come consistently enough. I'd bin both of them personally. Buy a new striker, someone like Nikola Zigic would work brilliantly as a lone striker. He's immensely tall, and has fantastic finishing. I'd then just play the 1 striker and move the other guy back into defence, with Richards and the new centre back in there.
Also, give Ched Evans a promotion to the first team squad, he's dynamite, and English. He's scored 4 goals in 2 starts for me, including a hat-trick on debut (Y).
Hope it helps